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Voted For: For$akeN

[font=arial narrow]Empire
I liked your punches they were hard & connected there..
Yo flow was pretty decent & it didn't fall or nuttin..
Tha structure was in place...it didn't stretch out..
All together you had a pretty nice flow there..
7.5/10

For$akeN
I liked your punches too...they were hard & they landed..
Flow was aight..didnt fell or nuttin..
Structure was nice..
But all 2gether ur verse was nice & had a slight harder punches than Empire...
8/10

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ok this honest lil feedback
cuz i can vote cuz i have "reasons"

For$aken:

you had some nice punches in there
but you mostly got on his weight and didnt mix it up
but your structure wsa good and flow also

Empire:

very nice vocab here
you had some nice punches
and your verse was very complex i say
and you didnt need a pic to win this

but both were good

ps:this my 1st time on elite FL lol

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This was an aight battle..

For$aken attempted a lot of personals.. but some of them seemed quite corny.. the like the remote line.. i liked the extra chin line though.. i was laughin at that.. some of his punched connected..

Empire did ok as well.. explainin some of those punches took away from them, i.e. the star wars one.. the explanation wasnt needed.. the personal was pretty good about the R-Rated.. some of ur punches connected as well..

So yea..

That is all.

Yes.. This was meant to be feedback..

shit I want to vote on this battle but I can't cause the boxes not appearin so I can drop feed. WTF?

Voted For: Empire

honestly...i don't think this was close at all...forsaken..i've seen your work and i think your a lot better this....as a matter of fact..i thought this was weak..no offense..no hate...maybe i just didn't understand the punches....which i have no problem with...but i just wasn't feelin it..

no hate though...i got a ton of respect for you....thats just how i saw it..

you empire...your verse was alright..it had some good punches...wasn't jam packed but it was decent....you got my vote

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Voted For: For$akeN

I'm going with this verse the poor to guess line had me in a laughing fit...that was nice lookin there...

Empire it was an aight verse u posted but not much really stood out for me to be honest...flow and structure was on point...ur punches lacked in places but picked up in others like the personals too...ur wordplay and imagery i'll give ya good ones for that jus a shame they didn't hit hard enough.

For$aken dope...flow structure decent really readable 1 link didn't work but the poor to guess line was decent lookin...punches connected...persoanals...go to you because you based ur rhyme souly on that picture...again good lookin...rhymes were decent the verse was layed out really well to me...

Empire you have put out sum good spits but i think this time u were beaten...sorry man...

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oh yea, i read this before, i ain't gonna vote on it tho, but i had thought that Empire took it, he won in every category accept personals..

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damn, maybe i should of voted, i thought that Empire had tgis in the bag..

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I feel that it was unfair that i didn't vote, so heres an explaination of why i think that Empire barley took it, but no hate For$aken, you ripped him up personally, i just think that you over did it, one hard personal would of impressed me..

Personals - obviously For$aken, he ripped you up with that picture, i used that against you too empire, he put a lot on it tho, and made a couple of observations that were clever when he flipped it. like the cell phone thing.. coz u denie it, but i do still think you're caliph, but it's all good..

Punches - Empire had better punches man, he put a little more into them and they were more complex, harder to think up, it was more clever coz he had no real personals, but the punches landed..

Wordplay - empire had a slightly better rhyme scheme, his lyrical content was better, and syllable count was nice..

flow - i have to give this to no one. both of your flows were nice and i can't justifu giving it to one over the other..

overall - this is why i think he won, the wordplay and punches basically had it for me, For$aken if you would of used multies, you would of got my vote, coz it was basically up to one category, you had personals, he had punches, now the wordplay, and he got that..

So this is my vote, strobe if you can't count it go ahead, coz i should of voted in the first place, but i figured that Empire had it, but For$aken came hard too, so i guess that's how it crumbles.. no hate For$aken, u can still easily take it, this is just my honesty..

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Voted For: Empire

Opener - Empire, good use of opponents name...
Closer - Neither, thought both were weak...
Punches - Empire, Forsakens were not as strong...
Personals - Forsaken, whole verse seemed to be personals...
Multies - Empire, had mad multies...
Metas - Tie, both had good metaphors...
Structure - Tie, both were neat and organized, look good...
Vocab - Empire, not for nessecarily havin bigger words, just more tech and descriptive...

Forsaken: I guess it was kinda creative to try battling against the picture of your opponent. Ill give you that much but I thought you coulda done a better job man. Work on multies and better punches instead of so many personals.

Empire: All around pretty good verse, just work on throwin some more crafty/witty punchlines and wordplay in that and youll have these battles no prob.

Close battle, props to both, no hate...this vote goes to Empire...

Voted For: Empire

aight

for$aken:
nothin wrong with flow or anything... But some of your punches were kinda weak. And that whole pic thing was a bit much... It was like you were struggling to find things to diss him on, and in the end found a couple things that seemed a lil far fetched. And what was ya closer?? was wierd...

Empire:
Wordplay was nice.. Nothin wrong with flow. Punches were mostly hittin.

Both of you had a good structure... But ive seen you come way harder in other battles... ah well..

Emp just edged it out on this one..

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