can ya'll vote on this so it can be closed........

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Voted For: Elusiv G

Hey .... i am gonna hafta say.... Elusiv got this one.... ... He didnt have all that good structure... but Da quiets was horrible.... no hate.... and i liked elusivs flow better .. i could follow it easier...

Keep it up..

Peace/...

Voted For: Elusiv G

aight...long fuckin battle ere....da quite one...ur verse structure was all over.....the only thing tht made it the slightliest bit easy to read was the multis....but u did have some ok punches...a lil wordplay...not much...couldnt get any flow from it......work out ya structure and u shud be ok.....and throw harder punches man...overall...ok verse...

elusiv...u had a better verse..flow and structure was better altho ya lines varied a lil...but ur punches were deffo harder...some ok wordplay again......there were no major personals in either verse but like i say..u took it wit the punches...no hate...pz to both...

my vote=elusiv g

return the favour wit an honest vote plz....

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Voted For: Elusiv G

This is already over and dun, cos i'm battlin' da quiet 1
I'ma make it last and hav fun, anuva newb gettin merked son
Wats dat I cant hear wat ur sayin? (stop Elusiv G pleaz!!!)
nah man now u realize i werent playin', i never appease
U issued an open battle wit no stipulations
Saying u'll beat ne1,even me, u must b mistaken
So far ur posts r nuttin but 1 lliners, all dat dus, is make u look minor
Writtin' wackness for posts, nigga ur a joke
Scammin' like ho bitches, for money and riches
Into the wrong battle thread ur hand is dipping
If jack black spat ur shit he'd say he was slippin!
Ur lucky I dnt physically show emotions, i use lyrics to manifest ma rage as rhyme explosions
That are merkin and constantly movin' like motion
Da quiet 1 shud b called DA Wack 1, for real son
Exile ur ass, permanently banned from RV.com
U can talk bout how u clap guns, but u shoot blanks
Dont worry, i showed ur girl da way 2 da sperm bank
Ur slugs lack force, they bounce off me, hit da floor and contort
Your rhymes like ur face, disfigured and full of warts
Ma lyrics I publicly brandish, I'ma use ur lack of skill to ma advantage
I'm a lyrical alchemist, I spit magic, u spit shit
Ur rhymes are inept, got u sounding dyslexic
I can understand ur Mc name reasoning, but ur lyrics lack spice they need seasoning
Coos their bland and lack taste, u best neva test me again or u'll end up flat on ur face!!!

^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U HAD PUNCHES AND FLOW NICE MAYNE AND PERSONALS,,,,,,,,GOOD ISH RIGHT HURR CREATIVE PUNCHES


yo my flows da shiznik,elusive g you rap like the british version of limp biskit,i'll leave you deep in the ocean where da oysters and shrimp is,you ain't an m.c. you can't even hold your own in a battle,in my verbal assult trial i'll jump the box an bludgeon you to death with the judges gavel,da quiet 1's too much for you to handle,you can't get a hold on me,when i flash da 38 rotary m.c's start clutchin their rosary's,you ain't even hard vocally,i'm surprised to see that you have a couple wins,their probly battle sessions you had with mentally challanged chimp's,you never stood a chance against me so why try,my minds more creative than albert einstien's times five,my thought patterns stay intricite,venomous i'm possesed by a symbiote,my crime syndicate'll squash you like an incect,i'll run infinite laps around ya intellect,you're the poster child for family's commiting incest,you fuckin inbread,you aint never around when niggas spin lead,i'll leave you with more holes in ya dome than hellraizer's pin head fuck face,i'll jack off on my hand, slap you across the mouth so you won't have to ask your girl how my nut taste's,

to every one who read this i just want to put a cap on my first text..........

yo elusive g you ain't elusive,you just stupid,
i'ma leave a broken arrow in ya heart like the evil version of cupid,...............
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ STRUTURE IS WACK,,,,,,MEANIN DA FLOW IS WACK,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,YO ELEVATE USIN STRUTURE,,,,,,I COULDNT READ IT BUT IF U FIX DA STRUTURE,,,,,,I READ IT ANYWAY U DIDNT HAD PUNCHES BUT WERENT REALLY HITTIN IT,,,,PLUS U DIDNT HAD NO FLOW CAUSE DA LACK OF STRUTURE

ELEVATE USIN STRUTURE HOMIE "OK"

DIS BATTLE GOES TO ELUSIV G

HE HAD ALL AROUND BETTA VERSE,,,,,,,,GOOD PUNCHES (CREATIVE&DECENT) AND NICE FLOW

DA QUIET 1-BAD STRUTURE,,,,,,,ELEVATE,,,,,,,,,,PUNCHES WERENT REALLY HITTIN IT,,,,,,,,, AND DA FLOW WAS MESSED UP

~PEACE~

RETURN AN FAV ELUSIV G

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lol, just checkin the polls (didnt realize i voted on this) yea juss checkin the polls, suprized to see ya 3-1 up G, But nice job, keep the hot rhymes comin

upppin for the council members win!

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