i will re after work.......

my vote will stand.....

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Ima "GAT"-THIS-"FOO" Let the Led TACKLE-YOU
Call me Adolf in this battle cuz Ima ATTACK-THIS-JEW
^^^5/10 Played
Then SLICE-n-DICE-YA-DUDE, Im TWICE-AS-NICE-AS-YOU
Cuz your "punches" wouldnt be "sick" if you ate HEPITITIS-RICE and learned KUNG-FU!
^^^5/10 elementary
Gat, You just spittin DEAD-FLOWS, Ya Wack, Ya TEXT-SHOWS
My punches will hit this bitch so hard his fuckin HEAD-EXPLODES!
^^^ 5/10 need to actually connect
Watch me CRACK-BACK when I SNAP-YA-SPINE after I CLAP-THE-NINE
Tuck ya head into ya ass to prove you "fuckin" OUTTA-YA-MIND!
^^^8/10 much better...now only if all ur lines were like this
Then SNATCH-YA-THROAT, pimp slap and DETACH-YA-SCROTE
Cuz the only way shotta will win this battle is if his homies are ASKED-TO-VOTE!
^^^6/10 now im starting to think u bite from that line above dwodn
I ATTACK-FOR-THE-GREEN, This kid gets bent BACK-WIT-VASOLINE
Watch this fool get "COTT" wit so many punches its a CATASTROPHY
^^^5.5/10 for effort
Ima be FLAWLESS-IN-THIS-FIGHT, Leave shotta JAWLESS-ON-SIGHT
Cuz ill "cut this bitch down" to prove im the "TALLEST"-ON-THIS-SITE
^^^6/10 ok...but im bored
I see youve been KO'D-ONCE, im battlin a PLAYED-OUT-DUNCE
Cuz this bitch is only hard when he sees DAY-OLD-CUNTS
^^^7/10 made me laugh
You cant FUCK-WIT-THE-ILLNESS, leave you STUCK-WIT-THE-REALNESS
Cuz bitch,ill cut off ya hands to prove PEOPLE-WIT-NO-HANDS-FEEL-THIS
^^^7.9/10 nice
Ya goin DOWN-TONIGHT, I hold the CROWN-THAS-RIGHT
Call me King Kong cuz ima crush ya TOWN-ON-SIGHT
^^^6/10 blah

^^^overall 61.4 i think

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MATTEE1...(weak)
Premanition...(ok battle)

all i did was post the winners verse coz its the only one that deserves to be ther..

winna- wish...but was sorta weak....work harder

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MATTEE1...(weak)
Premanition...(ok battle)

upppin 4 votes

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

shoota boy won this battle,
shotta coming up,wish aint hit all too hard, and shoota had some nice personals

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hehe, I cant vote cuz Im on wishes team...But truthfully it was a nice battle....but wish had more ....complexity and laughing matters nice 1 shot

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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

aiight, good as battle boiz....
opener - wish
closer - shot
flow - shot
punchez - wish
v/ shot got my vote cause it was jsut a bit easier to read and hisflow was better.... this aint no ahter vote cause wish u tiiight as man..good battle.

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Nice Drop Both Of Yall... Cant Vote On This 1 But Shotta You Got Sum Competition... So Wateva Good Luck Both Of U

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