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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
09-23-04, 09:59 PM
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Vendetta the K.O. King
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I said quit uppin ya own stuff. You reply to ya own thread again and I'ma close it
-Phenom
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09-23-04, 11:45 PM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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Flow was ok......could still be brushed up a bit. Vocals definately need to be raised. You lacked emotion on this one too.....I think that's what seperated this from being a good track, you could have made up for most of your flaws if you would have just put a little more emotion in this one....keep dropping, you'll get better
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