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Voted For: ~Sonofisis~

k im gonna narrow this down a lil easy:

Lady Fiya:
no hate but you got beat in this the only thing i real notived you had better were vocabulary and a closener but mostly i think sonfisis won he had better shit.

Sonofisis:
k you clearly won bein honest you hd everything else but you didnt havent stucture whitch you dont realy need to win anything lol so im given him the vote nice shit yall.

VOTE: Sonofisis

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Voted For: ~Sonofisis~

I'll Knock Yo ass Out, like too much of the Beer Hit Ya
Your talent is like this Photo, I never Got a Clear Picture
right there thats what took it. real personal
Da truth's hidden, got voters 2 scan my verse like hieroglyphics!
y hypocrit mimesis? Ya record pull newbs like inertia n physics
i appreciate vocab but u coulda did a punch that dont need a dictionary

So watch me kidnapp this bitch and hold her weav for Ransom
I would say that i ended your career, but geez, u never Had 1

grimey!!

Name change per week, riders vote make ya losses word-perfect?!
you overrated? Yea, like rakin’ ice you only defeating the purpose!


best punch in ya verse. really hot

overall fiya took vocab son took punches personals equal cuz fiyas was a little too deep. son was straight to the point no explanation needed fiya had to start her verse wit one
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Voted For: ~Sonofisis~

Ok, this was a close one. Both of you had good structure and punches, and some nice wordplay too. Lady Fiya I liked your opener, but the 3rd and 4th lines didn't really hit that hard. The next 2 lines were good, nice personal too, and I like the way you played off his name Datruth. Then your closer I wasn't too satisfied with. It was set up like it was gonna hit hard, but you could've used a lot more things than "rakin' ice" to make the line more effective. Sonofisis your opener was aight, nothing too special, but you made up for it with the next bar, with a good play off the whole "dutchess of metaphors" thing. The next bar about Princess Diana was the highlight of your verse, good job there. The next 2 bars were alright, the "gasonline" line could've been better I felt but it didn't really take anything away from your verse. You closer was aight too, as your last line is a little old, but the line about kidnapping her weave made me laugh.
Vote - ~Sonofisis~

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Voted For: ~Sonofisis~

Lady, you said at the bottom of your verse that you did the max of 8 bars, you only did lines, 8 bars is 16 lines, not hatin just wanted to make sure you knew..anyways...

Opener - Sono, Lady seemed to be trying to rhyme too hard which threw off the whole opener, (didnt make much sense)

Closer - Sono, hit hard, nice closer, ladys again was kinda wack but not too bad, just didnt hit as hard

Punches - Sono, his verse was longer which alloud him to throw more of his hard punches

Personals - Lady, she actually had some alright ones whereas sono didnt really use any

Metas - Tie, both verses had equally hard metas that were used

Multies - Lady, she tried to use some in there unlike sono didnt have any

Structure - Sono, I like verse better when theres only your verse and thats it, makes it neater and easier to read, Lady had stuff onto and underneith her verse

Vocab - Lady, more complex verse than sonos

Flow - Sono, I was feeling your flow, Ladys was kind of off cause some of the larger words didnt fit in

Creativity - Tie, I think both verses were equally creative as you both used 1 link each within your verse and both had some kool ideas to spit about

Overall, as you can see above, sonofisis took this one. Althought it was a pretty good battle, you can only have one winner and im sure the votes will show that sonofisis took this one, Lady, elevate on structure/flow of your verse, yours was good but if it Props to both, no beef, just an honest vote in my opinion, payce..