Voted For: Yvonne

sup yve?

ya flow got a little stretched at times but i see ya constantly getting better...good deal with the nameplay... punches were better...nothing spectacular but still stronger than "Limited" editions...lol

Limited came soft with the attack..."only way you sick" lines are played...second bar was filler...third bar was wack... closer needs a lot of work... omma give you the benefit of the doubt and say it was a rushed verse but you need to get more complex and build ya vocab... come with harder punches... work on ya structure too...not too bad but it still needs work

Voted For: Yvonne

aiight good battle....
opener - yvonne... it was a aiight operner 7/10
closer - yvonne.... good closer 8/10
flow - yvonne
punchez - yvonne
vocab - yvonne
structure - edition
v - yvonne... no hate she just had better verse..

uppin this peeps

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Voted For: Yvonne

not a real good battle...........................

breakdown line 4 line aight...................

You thinking to win this bitch shows u got it twisted
Blasphamig in ya spit…son u got ur death edition listed*
6...aight punch, nice personal but cud have been better.
dogs only bite,ur ghost shud be ready 2 write,u a vet?is a lie
so do us a fav&decline dis fight,cos u could hurt sum1's eye
6...1st line aight, 2nd line not so gud!!
ur punches would neva stand even if they were on ego
cos u still gatta pack heat from yve...the vol-ca-no
6...average punch, slight self glorification!!
ur rec has been geled,reseting it was stupid,cos ur skills got a limit**
my clocks ticking i aint got time to waist,sit bak& c ya loss come in a minuite
7...better, nice closer.

25/40


Now I am up against a girl, but I'ma rock this bitch's world...
She a'in' dope, only way she sick is when sickness hurled....
5...sick lines are played, i only like them if they make me laugh, and this one didnt.
Now I got you scared, well hoe, you should been prepared...
Jaw dropped and stared, well if you was hot, I may have cared
6...pretty weak man.
I haven't seen a picture, but if Eve ya sig, I'ma be a ditcher...
But sayin' you dope, is sayin' a martini doesn' have a mixture
7...nice line, gud meta.
I mean no offense, girl, but you better get a lil' common sense
You be like 50 Cent, if you think you can merk me...
...That's Ordinary Nonsense...
6...average closer!!

24/40

Both weak verses, both need to elevate the game!!

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