uppin on votes cuzzo get at this right here mayn

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Voted For: RED BEAM

My vote goes to Red Beam

The flow compared to Lyrical Disciple was much smoother, and the lyrics overall werent that amazing but were much more original. RED kind of fell off towards the end though.

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uppn ..........

Voted For: RED BEAM

Emcee:RED BEAM

Verse:
IP:


he wants us to compare him to washers, he says he's all around the whirl
Whenever beef crosses your path, you find a corner and curl
You prolly think like a diplomat, you love rockin pink
I guess i'll take out this old garbage, cause i learned you stink
Lyrical Disciple, thats funny, i'll never run to you for advice
Im the type to strike up fire, i'll get in yo head like lice
he only wanna battle me, cause i votes against his weak rhymes
Dawg, your facing one of the best, take this here as a sign
when i beat you 5-0...i know you'll be loosin it
but this nigga so used to failin, i think he's abusin it
Red BEAM on ya dome, this niggas rhymes is real simple
you got no potential to go against me, get popped like pimples

Comments:um...well overall your verse was better i couldnt get through the other guys verse coz of that ugly fuckin structure...

Marks:
Wordplay - 6/10
Metas - 7/10
Vocabulary - 5/10
Structure - 7/10
Punches - 6/10
Opener - 7/10
Closer – 7/10
Personals – 6/10
Enjoyment – 6/10
Creativity - 5/10
Overall - 62/100
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Emcee:Lyrical disiple

Verse:
exactly nigga ill put a "RED BEAM" on ya chest
have you gaspin for ya breath
you aint tha King from Sac you mean tha Queen
only time you royal is in ya dreams
thinkin you "got connects on RV"
sorry cuzz i think you mean "burgers at arbys"
ill serve you like employes servin coffe
get to cocky
and ill throw "punches" that will knock you out like "rocky"
ill "heat" you up like a "Red Beam" and "burn" yo ass like "usher"(usha)
get to close and tha Lyrics will crush ya
ill have ya so called "connects" turn they back and rush ya
cuzzo from Sac(sack)that why he be ridin dicks
he like a lil boy make beef and call it quits
ill play some"Basketball"with ya head
reshape it and play "Football" SOME BODY CALL THA MED!!!
ya choose "Red" you always end up bleedin
chrome on tha dash will leave yo ass freezin
like an ice cicyle
cant you see you fuckin with tha Lyrical Disciple
ya rhymes is played out you goin "around" in a "circle"
im "flooding" tha "flow" but im not steeve earkle
i hope this is Perspiuous cuzz i dont wanna have this conversation again
Gelatnous nigga for votes he go and try to make Friends

Comments:kid i couldnt even finish your verse coz it was just that horrid....elevate in UR STRUCTURE...i mean WTF is that...looks like men from all ethnicitys comparing their dick size...

Marks:
Wordplay - 4/10
Metas - 4/10
Vocabulary - 3/10
Structure - 1/10
Punches - 5/10
Opener - 4/10
Closer – 4/10
Personals – 3/10
Enjoyment – 1/10
Creativity - 2/10
Overall - 31/100
---------31%

thanx...uppppn ..................

thanx...uppppn ..................
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here you go drop an honest vote on this battle right here mayn

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uppn again bitches...some niggas need to get in here and vote on this shit

uppin on votes ppl get at this right here vote up on it

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uppin on votes ppl get at thig thang right here holla

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aye yo uppin on some votes yall niggas best get at this

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upppn this...its been 3-0 for the last 2 weeks

Voted For: RED BEAM

RED BEAM got this,,,,,

he had better flow and way better structure even know it wasnt that goos...... lyrical ... your lines are way streched...... Red so are sum of you r lines .. but better than lyricals....

Punches were about tied but i think RED came harder witht aht /... toooo

RETURN THA FAVA ON MY BATTLES BELOW~~~~~

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