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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
B.I.Detained 2 28.57%
Premanition 5 71.43%
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Old 10-18-04, 07:23 PM   #16
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good luck.........................................
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Old 10-18-04, 08:29 PM   #17
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Voted For: Premanition

ok this battle was kinda close to call for me, but it wasnt really one of the best battles ive viewed........ both of u concentrated on punches and personals more then anythin else, like multies.......... but ima have to give it to prem for havin a personal he could back up with proof for every line........ B.I. was sayin "ill show u links if u dont believe me" but then u didnt show the links......... i liked the "sarcastic premanition" line, but that was about it that got me....... both of ur flows werent the greatest but the lines fit together well for the most part....... and also B.I. had sum pretty weak filler/set-up lines...... u should find better things and a bigger vocab....
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Old 10-18-04, 08:49 PM   #18
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f.saken alias nuff said i want money word............
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Old 10-18-04, 11:02 PM   #19
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Voted For: B.I.Detained

Vote - B.I.Detained
Reason:
Better punches and wittier concepts...Premanition had alot of ok punches...but the explanations just completely ruined a majority of them for me...fact is...you explained every bar...yay...you came personal...but you had to explain it...that insults the reader....B.I. had a better overall verse...and was at least able to throw a punch that hit...
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Old 10-19-04, 02:45 AM   #20
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o.k

uppin......................................
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Old 10-19-04, 12:12 PM   #21
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come on y'all don't slepp on this shit......................

peace
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Old 10-19-04, 12:25 PM   #22
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Originally Posted by FuxJustAWord
Voted For: Premanition

ok this battle was kinda close to call for me, but it wasnt really one of the best battles ive viewed........ both of u concentrated on punches and personals more then anythin else, like multies.......... but ima have to give it to prem for havin a personal he could back up with proof for every line........ B.I. was sayin "ill show u links if u dont believe me" but then u didnt show the links......... i liked the "sarcastic premanition" line, but that was about it that got me....... both of ur flows werent the greatest but the lines fit together well for the most part....... and also B.I. had sum pretty weak filler/set-up lines...... u should find better things and a bigger vocab....


Thanks for explaining and stuff.
But one thing..
PUNCHES only matter in a battle..
not fucking multis and vocab'.
If you wanna see mad multis & vocab'
go read one of my OM's.
I am a Topical Beast lol.

Anyways..
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Old 10-19-04, 12:29 PM   #23
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Voted For: Premanition

permanition had better punches and was more creative in hes verse, personal was good and wordplay was decent all around a tight verse 8.0...

B.I had a decent verse but lacked creativeness and some-lines took to long to get to the point u know like ya opener was ok but not hard hitting and set up line was a waste try to come harder in each line, ya flow was good wordplay aint see much, personal was decent but ya punches wasnt really there nither was ya creativeness.... 6.5
 
Old 10-19-04, 12:32 PM   #24
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lol Cheers I think.

I can only see 3 decent votes in this whole battle lol.
& to of them are for me.
Anyways dw you were right.
Front Lines is wack..
Good idea to put it here :-)
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Old 10-19-04, 03:32 PM   #25
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Old 10-19-04, 04:02 PM   #26
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Voted For: Premanition

i think this was a pretty straight battle. both of you cats got down. its close...but heres how i see it....

punches- close, but b.i.
personals- tie
vocab- close, but prem
flow- prem
multies- neither
structure- b.i.
overall enjoyment- prems verse is slightly more humorous...so he gets it

honestly, i'd like to see you guys go an extra bout. i think you both have alot of talent and i would like to see what you'd come with if you spit longer verses. good luck to you both...keep doing the damn thing fellas. one.

s.v...........c.s.
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