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socrates 5 83.33%
saaran 1 16.67%
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Old 10-23-04, 12:47 PM   #16
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k ... but u missed out on the aim convo we had... he was tryin to pull a race card on me...
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Old 10-23-04, 11:43 PM   #17
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Voted For: Socrates

Socrates- nice punches.....the wording was great..... the beggining was great ending was ok..........1st, 2nd, 3rd bars were fukin dope man.....

Saaran-bleh ok verse overall...word ya pucnhes a lil better.............not much...sorry
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Old 10-27-04, 07:19 PM   #18
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best line was ya closer.. shit i can find 3 different types of wordplays on that one... that was a dope punch....
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Old 11-10-04, 02:57 PM   #19
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Voted For: Socrates

Saaran

Claim ya runnin rv in text witcha vet status
you forget my text is rabid...
love to see how ass ya audio is... thats if you had it
Nah...weak opener, no diss.
I'ma whiteboi squeaky voice, i know it, cuz y'all seen this
Quit fuckin wit rv stick to penis...
diss how i'm white when ya name yaself afta a caucasion genius
LMAO!..errr, nah!
no terms for played words, slowly killed ya cuz ya heard my sins
not bad 8 losses...had that by the time i had thirty wins
nope...thats self glorify
Glad you quit battlin, your verse more from a corny guy
Shit yo ass came back to rv to up your porn supply
best bar^still weak...links are played

Socrates
I hate this fuckin pussy, cuz damn hes not at my level
So imma torch his shit like he sat on a toilet for the devil
nice...no punch but nice meta
Saaran imma use you name against you, wrap you ho
Cuz fuck im on a mission, and youre still in a pueblo
decent
Ill hit you below the belt, so when i aimed way down south
I swung and hit lips, and im NOT saying i hit you in the mouth
LMFAO..haha...dope bar right there
Fuck hes a whack everything. although he tries to fake it
Rhymes his softer than a pillow,so he should take his verse and blanket
yeah i get the concept..coulda bin worded better.
Im smashing you head in sliding glass doors, fuckin nympho
So ill show you to the door for your loss, and take the win-dow
lol...nice closer

Imma give this to soc. saaran ya didn't really have any punches in here. this would of worked better if it was audio.
soc just had harder punches and better wordplay, metas ect. the mouth punch was dope that def clinched the battle fo ya.

v/ Soc

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Old 11-16-04, 01:51 AM   #20
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Just checkin the polls............................1
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Old 11-16-04, 12:41 PM   #21
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not good, ahh.... not good.
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Old 11-16-04, 12:45 PM   #22
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Voted For: Socrates

this battle was pretty dope i expected a little more from saraan but his verse was good... i dont like the structure... no matter how you use that structure it still makes your lines stretched... couple OK punches but nothing too great...

but...

Fuck hes a whack everything. although he tries to fake it
Rhymes his softer than a pillow,so he should take his verse and blanket

this bar from soc was just dope... best in the battle and he stayed consistent with the disses... pretty good verse from you
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Old 11-19-04, 05:00 PM   #23
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dig dat^^? word, lets finish this little thang off
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Old 11-26-04, 01:54 PM   #24
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Claim ya runnin rv in text witcha vet status
you forget my text is rabid...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NOT AN GOOD PUNCH PLUS NOT AN GOOD OPENER


love to see how ass ya audio is... thats if you had it
I'ma whiteboi squeaky voice, i know it, cuz y'all seen this
^^^^^^^^^^"ERM" ELEVATE ON PUNCHES FLOW TOOK OVA THIS PART BUT DA PUNCHES COMPLETLY WACK MAYNE

Quit fuckin wit rv stick to penis...
diss how i'm white when ya name yaself afta a caucasion genius
^^^^^^^^^^^ BAD PUNCH NOT HARD HITTIN AND NOT AN GOOD STRUTURE

no terms for played words, slowly killed ya cuz ya heard my sins
not bad 8 losses...had that by the time i had thirty wins
^^^^^^^^^^^^ "EH" NOT AN GOOD PUNCH

Glad you quit battlin, your verse more from a corny guy
Shit yo ass came back to rv to up your porn supply
^^^^^^^^^ O OK THAT WAS AN OK PUNCH BUT STILL CHA VERSE WAS PLAYED OUT



SARRAN- U HAD AN WEAK VERSE DEM PUNCHES WERENT HARD HITTIN AND PLUS CHA FLOW WAS CHOPPED UP IN SOME PLACES , BUT EITHER WAY DIS WAS AN WACK VERSE NO HARD HITTIN PUNCHES AND NO FLOW PLUS NO PERSONALS




I hate this fuckin pussy, cuz damn hes not at my level
So imma torch his shit like he sat on a toilet for the devil
Saaran imma use you name against you, wrap you ho
Cuz fuck im on a mission, and youre still in a pueblo
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ O AIIIIIIIGHT "OK" PUNCH COULD'VE BEEN BETTA BUT GOOD FLOW MAYNE


Ill hit you below the belt, so when i aimed way down south
I swung and hit lips, and im NOT saying i hit you in the mouth
Fuck hes a whack everything. although he tries to fake it
Rhymes his softer than a pillow,so he should take his verse and blanket
Im smashing you head in sliding glass doors, fuckin nympho
So ill show you to the door for your loss, and take the win-dow
^^^^^^^^^^^ "EH" OK PUNCHES NICE FLOW


SOCRATES- AIIIGHT MAYNE ELEVATE ON PUNCHES I MEAN SERIOUSLY BOTH OF U NEED TO ELEVATE ON PUNCHES


OVERALL=THIS WAS AN WACK BATTLE, LOOK LIKE AN NEWB ONE, OK

SARRAN- U DIDNT HAD NO PUNCHES NOT HARD HITTIN ONES AND FLOW WAS CHOPPED UP IN SOME PLACES ELEVATE ON THAT OK

SOCRATES- U HAD FLOW BUT DA PUNCHES WERENT HARD HITTIN ATLEAST U HAD PUNCHES

V-SOCRATES- FOR HAVING PUNCHES AND HARDER ONES TOO

BASICALLY- SARRAN U CAME TOO BASIC,
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