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Old 10-24-04, 06:34 PM   #16
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Old 10-24-04, 08:45 PM   #17
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Old 10-24-04, 11:19 PM   #18
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yo im really feelin the story line, most of the structure was good, not that much flo, and i aint much with rhymin same words, like me and me, but i like the story, maybe you could put more into her feelings seein wat was happenin.
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Old 10-24-04, 11:31 PM   #19
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