wtf are u talkin about? this wasnt a battle....this was a topical......punches and personals? did u even read it?

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Voted For: Ike

very nice, smooth verse... heres how i broke it down:

its how the kid uses an accent, the way that he talks fly
imitates a pimp with a limp when he struts as he walks by
-haha... wannabe pimp
its how he releases anger with a pen and some paper
releases venemous vapor, with his sinister nature
-nice use of multis
its how you always see the kid with his headphones blaring
nodding his head and vibing, aint no parents gon' tell him
-didnt catch a rhyme there at all
nothin different, dont oppose his style, he knows he's wild, he'll just blow you off
if you hate he just go's ahead to brush his shoulder off
-nice
its how he's his own person, how he writes his raps
its how he's so certain of how he's right for rap
- rhymes rap and rap, but still flows smoothly
its how theres no doubt in his mind that he's destined to blow
its how the more shit he goes through, the better his flow
-very nice
its how he gets a new record and you wont see him for a month
cause he's locked in his room listenin, learning every single punch
-good, i like it
its how he flows, how he learns, how he rips,and how he rocks
its the only things he knows, its his love for hip hop
-nice

but, sounds more like a song or poem than a battle.. didnt really git any real punches.... but it was pretty dope, so ill give it 2 u. it was also much easier 2 read

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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt

lol well we both got a crappy vote against us so i guess we just keep it at 1-1 and not worry about disqualifying the votes....uppin

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Voted For: Ike

ike got this easily but i did like both but king just didnt keep me as interested as ikes.ike had an old school style to it but both do need elevation on topics,u have to have the knowledge of hip hop history in your head if you wanna maek this topical perfect but none of u showed that.well keep it up ya;ll but ike gets it for being more on my style.good multis from king dipset tho but not a good flow from him so there.
ps.return the favor ya'll in my sig thx -1-

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Led Poetic

aright thanks for the votes....uppin again lets get this battle over with

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Voted For: King~~Dipset

... aight this was a decent topical. i liked the topic and ya both did ya thing so this is my breakdown

King- great wordplay and creativity... structure was hit and miss tho so keep elevatin on that aspect of it.. over all i liked ya verse, it was powerful and had a lot of meaning to it...7/10

Ike- wordplay was...aight. creativity was good and structure was ok. i liked ya verse all except when you said its how over and over and over and over again... WAY to repetative... no hate hommie. overall verse 5/10

not a bad battle but King won this one... no hate to Ike cause you came and did ya thing and i respect that... good battle and stay up...keep elevatin both of you.. good battle

VOTE-King

uppin on this battle yet again......lets get some votes

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uppin this battle yet again.....someone vote on this shit and get it over with

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uppin for votes again....lets get some votes in here

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uppin for votes again.....lets get this over with...

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uppin on this.....somebody vote..............................

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Voted For: Ike

king-dipsett: ima be real, i wasnt really feeln yo flow dawg(but no hate) u had some nice stuff in there, but i think thruout yo whole verse u were kinda repeating urself...yo structure was not good to me, because u had too mnay stretched line, but u did stay on topic. ur rhyming words were too simple also...i rate yo verse 4/10

ike: i wasnt really feeln urs either, but it was better in my opinion, slightly because yo structure was better, and because this is text, i could understand it better. yo rhymin words were good, and un-predictable, and u came consistent thru yo entire verse. u also stayed on topic, and had more creativitie
overall-i voted for ike because he had better structure and explained the topic better...he also spread his verse around(which kinda falls in structure)...just an all around better verse...but good drop, both yall...

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aright thanks for the vote ...........lets get this shit over with already....been up too long

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lets get this shit over with already.................

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ok let get this shit over with already dammit......taking to long

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