this was okay for an alright piece, this was a quite old read to be upped so no clue why this happened anyways...blaw decent read iguess...elevate on imagery however its much needed

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.. I Don't Believe It Need To Be Stated Yet : I Haven't Been On In A Good While That Is Where The 'Up' Came From Obviously ...

But Thanks For The Feedback...

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this was cool, decent vocabs and shit and overall quality delivery, but the imagery was average at best, it needs to be upped to a higher level to make the quality of the piece that much better.

and...

welcome back, i ain't seen you on in a long ass time, not since i made that freeposting thread we had

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And I Have Not The Slightest Idea Of Whom You Are...


Thanks For The Feedback Though Was Appricaited

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O_o....Back huh?.....

*Plays mace welcome back*.......

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mystery Is a Freak!!

ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*

Thank........................................You

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wow....damn i had to read dis 3 timez....lol......vocab n structure were both off da chain....da flow was hella good......damn ma.....nice job of reppin da femcees....plz leave some feed on my piece "Who Am I"....1

Thanks 'C' For The FeedBack ... Most Appriciated -No Doubt-

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