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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
..Xplicit.. 5 100.00%
FlyWhiteGuy 0 0%
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Old 11-06-04, 07:19 PM   #16
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uppin this
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Old 11-06-04, 07:40 PM   #17
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Voted For: ..Xplicit..

easy battle to vote on

punches- Xplicit cuz u had em
personals- Xplicit cuz u had em
metas- Xplicit cuz u had em
multis- Xplicit yours just flowed better
flow- Xplicit cuz FWG felt forced
structure- Xplicit overall better to look at
humor- Xplicit had me laughin

Xplicit i have notin to say on how to improve

FWG cant say the same for u. structure wuz screwed up, no punches, no personals, an attempt at multis, no metas, flow wuz forced, and no humor. all u did wuz self glorify, youd be a lot better if ya would throw a punch.

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Old 11-06-04, 07:43 PM   #18
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FWG throwin punches is wut u do in battlin, if u dont want to self glorify then go to the self glorify cypher and do topicals cuz i think youd be better there.
 
Old 11-06-04, 07:44 PM   #19
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^^^ if u want to self glorify*. do topicals cuz i think youd do better there*

had to correct some typin errors
 
Old 11-06-04, 08:12 PM   #20
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Voted For: ..Xplicit..

my vote goes to xplicit, yo white, your flow was wack!! your punches were pretty weak and you need to elevate! , but its your first battle so you can only get better i guess, xplicit, nice flow, it was all pretty even and nice structure, punches were nice, pretty hard hitting, bit of nice wordplay, over all better verse!

pleasse drop a vote on one of the battles below ok, thx
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Old 11-06-04, 08:49 PM   #21
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.Sum1 vote mayn.
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Old 11-06-04, 08:57 PM   #22
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Voted For: ..Xplicit..

this is a onesided battle,xplicit got this easy in my opinion, he had complex punches and most of his lines stood out unlike flywhiteguy,flywhiteguy had a good flow and structure but he lacked hard hitting punches and personals,both keep elevaten keep it up and return the favor in my sig thx
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