Voted For: Mag.Nif.I.Cent

I thought that Mag's takes this battle becasue his
verse was more complex with greater imagenry..
With better vocab and multies. His verse was more
in depth of where the person in his verse was and
what they was doing...

D I really liked your verse, you had nice flow and
decent imagenry you also used nice vocab..

I thought that you didn't really try in this one
because I have seen better from you or you must
have rushed your verse. would have beat a lot of
people on this site but not Mags.

Vote ~ Mag

Voted For: Mag.Nif.I.Cent

aight this was a very good topic first off.... i read both twice, and i loved the stand point of Magnificent's.. his imagery was very well developed, he started from stating how it felt like he had no friends cuz the drugs was the replacement to the sleepin in the alley, getting pissed on, and getting sick.. and how he used to be a rich person and free with his mind and spirit--but u can see the transition clearly, throughout his writing.. and he came up with a conclusion--how drugs wasn't the answer and then dies at the end.. so he was speaking from a dead person's perspective-- I find that very effective to the reader.. that u can start off with an major perspective that people can relate to, but then go deeper inside the issue.. that was really nice, the word use was very creative, rhyme was nice-- even tho u didn't need any at all.. i say 9.6/10 for magnificent.. i seen no str8 flaws within this..

Dabatos-
i was feeling your stand point too.. i liked how u started off "blaming" the drug like most people would do-- so i find that very realistic.. but it's like u stated it as a fault but didn't continue it.. u went off into saying how u tried it once, but not connecting the two (in my opinion).. u had nice imagery also, but ur points didn't connect--that's my main problem with yours.. i liked the part that said:
I did know well, after one try, dat i'll stick wit this sad addiction..
I was warned n didn't listen, now wishin that blunt i was never givin...
^cuz it's like the person finally owned up to responsibility.. your flow was really nice, rhyme scheme was really good.. i just was feeling how it was going throughout- not a really good connection... but it wasn't bad.. i say 8.7/10

Good luck.. you two, but Magnif. gets the vote..

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Voted For: Mag.Nif.I.Cent

hmmmm ok
wow magnif your really coming around
ur emotion and imagery were there
and the message you sent in this sounds on point
but what need work is your spelling at some points
but beside that not bad

ingenius
u had nice vocabulary and werd choice
but the imagery lacked just a little
and your emotion was ok
i couldn't quite say anything more about your piece
because i felt u should of wrote more to this topic

but anyways for obvious reasons this goes to magnificent

decent battle yall'

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Voted For: Mag.Nif.I.Cent

flow intelligent took this one. better wordplay, and more creative and advanced in vocab in this one. yo verse just had me tuned in...when i read dabatos verse, i wandered off a lil, because the verse wasnt interesting to me..flow intelligent, u got skills word-up. i usually dont vote on these long ass battles, but yo verse got me hype, and dabatos, yo shit was kinda too short, and u didnt hit tha topic better than ur opponent.i think u got skills, just too simple with tha rhymes.elevate on that...yo had some good lines in there tho

overall this was crazy...dummy good verse, but only one person can come out on top, and after tha first 4 lines, i think that was decided...

plz return tha favor with an HONEST vote on battle in my sig...i'l hit up another one of yalls if yall hit this up...HONEST PEOPLE...no hate...1