that should make it 3-0 elemental is up...........

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what u changed ya mind after saying he needs to re-read his verse an that he should read some tutorials on ryming an that he didnt come hard...

and u just changed ya mind???????

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http://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?t=160715

Voted For: Jay-SmileZ

"POKING BEHIND" in tha MIC only way u can get ya "ASS in da BUSSINESS"/
ELEMENTAL claims he eats EmcEEs....he does he "SWALLOWS my CHLIDREN"// (swallow yuck)

This was funny, man. Nice wordplay on it, it took me a while to get it but hey, I'm kind of slow.

In my opinion, this was a poor battle. ES verse was kind of sloppy, the only clever line I heard was this one:

"You must be stoned like a fucken madusa victim"

No wordplays, a few metas, but an overall poor quality. Didn't try to hard, I suppose.

Jay attempted a good verse, but what can you do with only three bars? I'ma have to give this one to him, because of effort and an attempt at complexity.

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uppin............................................. ........

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Voted For: Jay-SmileZ

that was hott man keep uppin to get a win i like ur ryhmes and ur punches hit way harder his shyt was wack its that simple pot a vote on this
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Battle stats 3-0
KO'S
Weedex
Terror 2005
Wreckk

KINGDIPSET-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162918
WRECKK
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162997

Reppinn...................Retro-Bution.................

Voted For: Elemental Soul

You must be stoned like a fucken madusa victim
Ya rhymes wouldn't be durable if i put batteries in'em

^^NICE PunChe

I THinK ElemEntal goT thIS Cuz Just A SlightLy Head With HIss PunCHeS

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pIC oF tHE wEEk

Voted For: Jay-SmileZ

you got this easy with punches, and multies...


Elemental soul: your verse was not hott at all, the 3 letter rhyming at the end of each line needs to change and you at least need 3 word multies.. get some hotter punches too..
check out one of my battles and youll see.


please return the favor with an honest vote.. please..
hit my sig.

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Voted For: Elemental Soul

Break down:

Style: soul
Flow: more or soul but close
punches: really no one cause soul didn't have any really and jay's wack but it goes to jay
personnals: soul just cause jay only atemped punches
vocab: jay
win: hard choice but soul

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Voted For: Jay-SmileZ

i think jay took this one with harder punches and more consistency...he started off tight, and ended tha same way...elemental soul feel off near the end(last bar)..this battle went down to tha last bar to me, and that when elemental soul feel off...i think u should work on that...but for tha most part, punches in this battle we decent. i think elemental's structure was bad in this one...some of ur lines were too short for tha way u started off ur battle, but no hate, u still had a killer vote, just couldnt hold on in this one...no hate

overall-this was a nice battle, and yall was at each others throat on this one, it just went down to tha last bar...
return tha honest vote on battle in sig....1