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..:OutBreak:.. 3 37.50%
CriTiC 5 62.50%
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Old 11-20-04, 03:20 PM   #16
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Old 11-20-04, 06:32 PM   #17
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Old 11-22-04, 07:50 AM   #18
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Sup dope sig Out,,.... Up-ing this bitch,..........................


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Old 11-23-04, 02:06 PM   #19
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Old 11-24-04, 04:26 PM   #20
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uppin this joint for da fam... werd... strange topic... but hey... do da damn thang
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Old 11-26-04, 03:26 PM   #21
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Upiinnngggg please,,,,,..............

Rv FaM...

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Old 11-27-04, 12:47 PM   #22
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Voted For: CriTiC

ok both had good drops nice imagery and showed good pictures both aslos had good strutcure and vocab but while outbreak stuck to a good dope haunted house story critic made it soo much more and that was dope critic basically gets my vote with a better more creative story
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Old 11-27-04, 12:50 PM   #23
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Thanks for the vote E nuff luv,,....

Yo uping in this battle U heraedd,,...
 
Old 11-27-04, 01:05 PM   #24
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Voted For: ..:Outbreak:..

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I Feel That OutBreak Took This Battle Because of Better Imagery and Overall Story/Plot. I Felt Outbreaks Story More With Vocabulary, Emotion, and Straight Imagery.

Critic Your Verse Didn't Have A Good Ending and Rambled About The Same Thing...Use Distinctiveness and Creativity.

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Old 11-27-04, 01:06 PM   #25
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Old 11-29-04, 02:31 PM   #26
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Uping for votes come on now this battles been open for
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Old 12-01-04, 02:24 PM   #27
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Two votes against me from my biggest fams lol anyways
uping for votes....

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Old 12-03-04, 01:33 PM   #28
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Old 12-03-04, 10:10 PM   #29
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Voted For: CriTiC

CriTiC
structure was good.. flow was on targe.. imagery was pretty good.. the topic didnt allow for much emotion, but there was still a little.. u went about the topic in a pretty good way.. it wasnt expected to end like it did.. good shit..

Retro
structure is good.. flow is pretty good as well.. imagery was decent, at best.. some of the shit was either unneeded, or just retarded.. once again, the topic didnt allow for much emotion, so blah with that.. u went about the topic in kind of the same way CriTiC did, which was pretty interesting..

Overall
both had a good structure.. neither really had all that much emotion.. both went about the topic in the same way, which i found to be interesting.. CriTiC had the better flow.. Retro's fell off a little in the middle.. CriTic also had better imagery.. so, basing off of that.. CriTiC gets my vote..

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Old 12-07-04, 02:10 PM   #30
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