dude you had no wqit in ya entire verse..it was a poor battle verse..
oh n can you stop pm'n me...!, i don't help any1 so its not personal..

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

Voted For: ..:Outbreak:..

Ohhhh Shit thought I would peep this verse, dame
sinner your verse was well basic with played lines.
you did have some ok word play at times but some
lines like....

he thinks his rhymes are uneque he can't even speak
went out wid a dog for a week and she just got freaked
^^^Poor as hell^^^

Best bar was the close.

Out.. Come nice and won this battle on his frist bar basiclly

This Just another Oppurtunity For Sinner to Be Owned and Clowned-
Thought Xclusive was King of herb's, Obviously he was Overthrown and S was Crowned-
^^^Nice opener with a hard hitting punch.

Out had decent vocab, wordplay and flow and was
relentless with the punches...

Vote .:Out:.

Voted For: ..:Outbreak:..

Both needed better punches...no wordplay was here ^^^he had some wordplay throuwn in the mix. The flow i'm basing my vote on...

"This Just another Oppurtunity For Sinner to Be Owned and Clowned-
Thought Xclusive was King of herb's, Obviously he was Overthrown and S was Crowned-"

^^^Example of good flow this guy wrote up...this basically won th battle

Return the favor...OR I'LL NEVER VOTE FOR GUYZ BATTLES AGAIN...LOL
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Upping ...........Sinner Your Verse was worse than Wack............

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Voted For: ..:Outbreak:..

..:Outbreak:.. get my vote came much hard but didn thave very good stuture sinners was ok but he didnt come well ..:Outbreak:.. was much better came hard and had better flow ..:Outbreak:.. get my vote easy came way hard

/v ..:Outbreak:..

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hahha he got owned....werd killa verse.. hahha laughed so hard!!!

Voted For: Sinner

sinner got this cuz the other guy verse was all ova the place
sinner punches was just simple yet hit with enough impack to get the win

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Voted For: ..:Outbreak:..

This Just another Oppurtunity For Sinner to Be Owned and Clowned-
Thought Xclusive was King of herb's, Obviously he was Overthrown and S was Crowned-
^^eh ok, more humourous then anything..
I Mean Look at this Bitch, begging for help from different Crew's-
His Outlook On Battle's are Prolly You win some you lose some but obviously that don't apply to You!-*
^^decent..stretched a bit
It's Real Out Here...Huh...Kid You've got ya Priority's Mixed Up-
You ain't No Sinner,Ya Rhyme's are "Paw" Like the Andrex Paper Pup-**
^^good........
I'll Snatch the Breath From Ya Chest, and Leave a Standing Carcass
You Coul'dnt feel me if we were playing water Polo, and ya name was Marcus-***
^^lol, k this was decent
Your Open Mic's are Shit Kid Why not just Quit, Decease, Just Stop-
My Line's are Tight...Like Ya little Sister, Until They both Go POP!-****
meh weak closer
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Now shit break has come to give me a little tention
this mutha fucker is so old he forgot he's on a pention
^^ok, not bad but is it a real personal, i dunno..
and not to mention this little faggots a bitch and pedofile
mutha fuckers got health problems and he got the piles
^^no, not even a punch...
look at it's avatar it's a fuckin doll that is spankin
he gets turned on by it cause he's gay and starts jackin
^^bad ryhmin, no decent wit yet??.??
he thinks his rhymes are uneque he can't even speak
went out wid a dog for a week and she just got freaked
^^hell no, this is jus bad...doesnt constitute as a punch
Just read up about how you luv all ya monster munch
your gettin punched silly and you died wid my first punch
^^weak closer..
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k,outbreak..you typed in capital thats the main reason ya shit looked stretched at times, some of ya punches were decent closer was blah< not overly great but you had some wit in ya verse..(marco-polo,line)...decent drop..stay up..
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sinner,..your opener was decent< but it seemed like a fake personal..that aint koo.the rest of youy lines were simple n had no wittyness in them 1 line didnt even ryhme...
you gotta try n get some wordplay n better vocab...your structure was the only real thing you had going for ya....
..outbreak-gets my vote for havin some wittyness in his punches n keepin a decent flow throughout his verse...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

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