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Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio ![]() |
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0 | 0% |
M-Dog |
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5 | 100.00% |
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IP: 1AF0 6ADD
Voted For: M-Dog
aight this was a pretty decent battle, both of yall came pretty hard and i respect that shit. aight imma break it down for you right quick: Blackwell: aight you had an "ok" rhyme scheeme, flow was ok and so was wordplay, ya could have done a lil better on the punches and personals i think... structure was.....HORRIBLE.... so work on that shit, it made no sence, you had an ok verse except ya structure.... over all i would give ya verse a 5/10 M-Dog: aight i liked this verse, short but to the point... you flowed very well the whole verse and the wordplay was on lock..... it was creative and this line made it funny: 18 battles and 12 times u experienced a "herb-bashing", Ur vocabs like ur looks.........them "words ain't dashing", loved that line homie..... structure was awsome and the punches and personals obveously hit hard... this was a great verse 8/10 overall really good battle here... blackwell you just need to work on structure and making the punches and personals hit a lil bit harder homie... good battle yall but M takes this one VOTE-M-Dog |
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