Voted For: Two By Four

this was a okay battle...

Parallel, next time battle someone worth your time, because he was just a newb, n u've been here for month's..

parallel: Good structure, okay flow, and okay vocab. The punches basiclly killed him and also just because your verse was more complex, only thing you need to work on is punches, put more thought and creativity into it.

k-9: Hey man, your new to this site so this is what you should do, learn how to have better structure, like instead of putting something like

The heat in your chest is prolly gettin numb/
Cause i told you...can't murk a nigga wit a bigga gun/

that structure was bad, though structure doesn't really matter much, just make the flow better.. and also with that bar, the numb and gun rhymes are too simple, you should learn on how to uppin ur vocab, use word's like demolish, a promise etc..<these arn't like very good, but you should try to do go up to that level first then use more complex words like preventable, existence, etc...

vote: parallel

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