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Old 11-30-04, 04:45 AM   #16
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20 Grand, wasn't feelin' your flow at all homie, felt like you came madd generic wit it dogg, no hate, you need to just come more original.

Fiya- Love your voice baby girl, rymes was on point, but you need to work on your emotion and maybe enunciatin, cause your voice and your fast style make some of the words hard to catch, but you was overall livin' up to your name.

Production was aight, liked the beat, even though it was kontros and shit or whateva, liked the way it was mixed. Overall, decent, fiya saved the track. Keep droppin' both of y'all.

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Old 11-30-04, 08:53 AM   #17
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its not ur beat if u just dl it from SC... lol
Anyways thnd for the feed, uppn!
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Old 11-30-04, 11:56 AM   #18
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Uppnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Old 12-02-04, 05:02 AM   #19
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I was half feelin it...

Mainly cos I wasnt feelin that beat... Dunno why... but yeah...

20: Ya shit was pretty good... basically just do what everyone else told ya and put some more emotion into it.. youre bound to elevate so keep at it..

fiya: nice... fast is good for you.. u need a little more emotion, but your voice and flow I thought were good.. we should collab sometime..

overall a decent track.. beat = blah to me..
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Old 12-02-04, 05:07 AM   #20
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aight.. thanx fa the props.. i have another link.. follow the sig.. i'd collab with you.. hit me up sum time..
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Old 12-02-04, 05:11 AM   #21
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fa sure... ill add ya aim
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Old 12-02-04, 06:23 PM   #22
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Old 12-02-04, 09:24 PM   #23
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tight shit 20 grand what up? "Reloaded" up in thiz!!!
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Old 12-03-04, 12:03 AM   #24
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*listenin*
.... 20 u got good presence.... pretty simple flow tho.. and the lyrics were kinda blah... they were catchy and make a good commercial track but the lyrics werent workin for me wen u were like "wavin are pistols in the air"...... but the presence was enough to keep me listenin.... lady fiya.... High ass voice.. but ur flow is great.... doin it fast as hell and nice.... lost a few of the words, but it really worked well after 20s kinda slow verse..... lyrics were better than 20 no doubt... but u juss sound 12 on the mic.... but thats aight.... pretty good track....
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