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JaeBurnz354 | 3 | 37.50% | |
RapVerse | 5 | 62.50% | |
Voters: 8. You may not vote on this poll |
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12-13-04, 06:04 PM | #16 |
I walk & walk over you
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IP: 28AD 5545
Ok I See Too Many Dr's Hurr Fam So I'll Be Pm'ing Strobe About This Peace...people Explain Your Votes...stop Dr'ing
Peace
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12-13-04, 07:24 PM | #17 | |
Light Weight
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IP: 0825 899A
U.........P........P......P........i......N.......
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12-13-04, 07:30 PM | #18 |
freeze
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IP: 58E6 C588
Voted For: JaeBurnz354
V/JaeBurnz....he had better punchs an multi's an structure...Rap.. ....ur verse had sum punchs but u didnt come consistent wit the diss's..... punchs=Jb multis=Tie vocab=jb structure=jb overall=jb *RETURN THE FAVOR* Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
12-13-04, 08:57 PM | #19 | |
cold cold, keep shaking
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IP: C256 09C0
Voted For: JaeBurnz354
JaeBurnz definately won this one with better punches and wordplay... You could work on ur structure, but every thing else was near perfect... Fave/Best Line:There that should give you more of a punchline... I'ma leave u liek six packs, when it's crunchtime/(Hurting) Please Return Tha Favor @ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165710 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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12-13-04, 09:04 PM | #20 |
Flyweight
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IP: 4EC2 50FF
Voted For: JaeBurnz354
that was just plain better had better every thing man rv you need to elevate and then you go and send one of your lines as a pm wats up with that Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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12-14-04, 10:40 AM | #21 | |
New to RV
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
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I didn't send it, HE sent it to ME, you Fucking Moron. I swear you're the only person who couldn't understand that.
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12-16-04, 12:10 AM | #22 | |
Light Weight
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IP: 0825 899A
DaMn people have voted but not in the polls waddup??
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"Take you out of the game like James Worthy.You ain't worthy.Observe me.I send shots through ya jersey."(Jae Hood) <img src="http://img56.photobucket.com/albums/v172/taruncheelz/JaeBurnz354_copy.jpg"> |
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12-16-04, 01:50 PM | #23 | |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 4BD0 87AE
Voted For: RapVerse
JaeBurnz354 decent punches, nice structure vocab was good, flow was aight didn't see no wp from you, overall ur drop wasn't good..yo punches didnt make no sense.. RAPVERSE decent drop, punches were hard-hittin structure was blah, flow was aight..and ur vocab was aight..decent wp...overall decent drop..could've came harder tho but u took this win.. |
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12-16-04, 01:51 PM | #24 | |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 4BD0 87AE
forgot return the favor linkz in sigg
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01-10-05, 03:54 PM | #25 |
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
Is this a joke? The battle has been open for 36 days and has only recieved 2 decent votes.
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01-17-05, 03:09 PM | #26 | |
Is F'in Bored
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IP: A4E7 A821
Voted For: JaeBurnz354
i gotta give this one to jae burnz because his punches were just better but rapverse almost took this one. Had rapverse been able to come up with a better opener for that "watch as jae burns" punch he'd a won because both verses had holes in their punches. rapverse's 5th and 6th lines were weak as were alot of jae's punches. you both only had 4 good lines to me but jae's 4 were better than rapverse's 4 Nobody is layed back, I'm especially fierce here... Ya style has lyrica gaping hole like pierced ears/ There that should give you more of a punchline... I'ma leave u liek six packs, when it's crunchtime/(Hurting) and Man this is stupidity. he wants to win?? He-just-can't. There's more shit in his verse than sewage treatment-plant I'll beat the man, he's in Dan-ger, I make this gay-hurt only by spittin pure fire and watching as 'jae-burns' Like i said had rapverse been able to spit that jae burns joke better he proly would've won but i have to give it to jae burnz
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01-17-05, 03:13 PM | #27 | |
Is F'in Bored
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IP: A4E7 A821
oh yea and here are some of my battles check em out it's your chance criticize me for my lyrics
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=169162 me vs. youngsoulja http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=171308 me vs. nightmare http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=168874 me vs. magical |
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01-17-05, 04:44 PM | #28 | ||
New to RV
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
Lol...
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http://s3.-----------------/fernoe/...c=28&st=0&#last Rhyming crunchtime with punchline... http://www.google.co.uk/search?hl=e...nchline&spell=1 ^523 results. So much for all the votes on those 2 punches.
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01-17-05, 04:58 PM | #29 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: RapVerse
LOL Damn aii This Is What I feel I give My vote To Rapverse Bcuz Basically He Came way Much Harder with Punchez and personalz And Jaeburns Lines Were Played And weak (sorry buT the truth is the truth) so thats Just How I Feel and Im Pretty Sure Others Feel the Same Way Peace |
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01-17-05, 05:02 PM | #30 |
New to RV
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This was feedback posted for RapVerse
IP: 25DD A081
he got it................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .....to...........................me...........
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