Voted For: GangsStarShit

Daym, D Was Mad Cocky For Someone Who Easily Lost...
Here's The Breakdown...

Punches: G.S.
Wordplay: G.S.
Flow: D
Creativity: G.S.
Structure: G.S.
Overall Enjoyment: G.S.

Dj Got Owned Pretty Much...
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Voted For: d.j em sce

GangStarShit:
Whoever said you were dope...musta been kiddin,
Coz u only cause drafts from exhailin when spittin,
Mediocre opener, punch wasn't that hard
You paid the price although it's free-hatin-me,
And u've been spittin wack...since you lost CreatiVitie,
Decent personal, setup was weak though
Face it ya overrated and people jus dickride the shit you do,
Ya spits are lame shit i seen bacon spit better than you,
Weak, concept could've been worded better
Dexterious?...u the ginger midget makin up shit all day,*
And if you think your dope?...i'd hate to sce em d.j,
Better...nice play off his name
You take stuff too serious like it's a god damn mission,
And i'm afraid i can't help ya coz ya lost ya ambition
Weak closer, punch didn't really connect since he beat Ambition

d.j em sce:
your infantile style cant compete to my dexterous verbal rhapsody's
spitten at a high velocity is da only way to past your loosing capacity
Ok opener, not much of a punch but good vocab usage
you should have known im an mc who loves to kill people
you just got murdered….so theres neva gonna be a ill sequel
Weak...
kid you tryna rain but im changing the forecast like a weather man
im a veteran so next time stick to battling niggas dat you better than
Decent, setup was good but punch could've been better
ur not even fully developed so how u gonna get da bigga picture
dis aint a kodak moment its ur death in sum lyrical scriptures
Decent, nice meta here
damn im confused its like you wanted to loose at any cost
cuz even in the rules it stated that gangsstarshit already lost
Lol this was a bogus closer 'cuz you pretty much had that planned out...

Winner: d.j em sce, for harder punches and better wordplay. I've seen better from both of you though, this one was't that good of a battle.

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Voted For: GangsStarShit

This goes to GangStarShit. Structure str8 punches str8 creativity str8. I'm not sure but that looks like a personal. str8.
DJ you had played lines. No hard punches coming from that. Nice creativity though......

Vote GGS

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Voted For: GangsStarShit

Ok, this was hard to vote on. You both have real different styles in battling. I feel that GSS has a more text style with his punches and DJ has a more live battling style.

Its hard to choose which one I like better aswell. If I'm gonna vote on this soly as text, then I think GSS might take it. His style used wordplay even from the first bar.. dj, ya shit aint weak by any means, but I picture it more like a freestyled live battle where as GSS took more time comming up with wordplay text punches.

Its not easy to choose on this shit man, but dj brutha, I think ya might of underestimated his shit. He was able to make better use of personals even tho the last one didnt really work..

To keep this vote short though, Im gonna go with gss on this. Creative man it was good, just was more of a freestyle.. Lacked punches in some areas.. Would of been better audio.

Peace.

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Here is my vote.

GangsStarShit had this because he had more hard hittin punches and nice structure and creativity. Flow was off but the rest of the verse made it dope. The personal wasn’t good. I looked at it as a punch. Not hard htting though.

DJ you had played lines. Flow was there but ya need to ap about beating them lyrically not physically. …. Punches were weak. Structure need to work on that but like it really matters I could read it. Wordplay was nice but they needa be connected with punches.


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Voted For: GangsStarShit

aight this was a pretty good battle, tough one to judge so imma break it down for yall right here:

DJ- you came pretty hard, structure was pretty good although one or 2 lines were a little stretched but not too bad... flow was good throughout the peice and thats a pluss... punches and personals tho i feel could have hit a lil harder than they did... creativity and vocab was good so all in all this was an aight peice man.... 6.5/10

GSS- aight you came hard as well... structure was great which made the flow great as well, you used pretty good vocab in there as well which made for a good read... punches and personals i feel won this one for you, they were just to good to ignore, i would have wanted to see more multis from both of you but thats aight......overall 8/10

this was a tight battle.... both of you came hard as fuck and i def. respect that. DJ no hate bro but i think GSS got this one on the punches and personals, the rest i would have to say that it was a tie pretty much all around................. so overall good battle and no hate to either of you...........

VOTE-GangsStarShit

DAYUM...shit went from 1-0 to 4-1 like a mutha fucka...

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Voted For: d.j em sce

this was a good battle....when i first read gangstar's verse i thought that he was gonna win..but then after reading dj's i had to think about it.....here is the breakdown
opener:tie(both good)
wordplay:gangstar
punches:dj
vocab:dj
flow:tie
closer:gangstar's
*the categories were tied so it had to go to the person wit better punches*

gangstar-very good opener, liked the wordplay in it alot, good flow, basically good flow throughout the whole verse..also ended it good with the link.......you could have improved on your vocab, and came wit some better punches...other than that it was all good.

dj em sce-good opener, good vocab, punches could also be improved a little, but they were better than the opponents...also had a good closer.....could have improved on wordplay..

both-both people could improve on their punches...dj didnt have very many multies, but he had more than gangstar....gangstar is very good in the wordplay part of battles....dj is very good with vocab and word choice in battles...
overall; a very close battle....my vote goes to dj

v/d.j em sce

Voted For: GangsStarShit

GGS:
nice verse, good structure, good flow and punches.

DJ:
You didnt even try... lol... other shit of yours > this verse..
very weak.. -_-

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