Voted For: Flamin Barz

Lololmao This Kid Had Some Decent Shit...
Nver See Either Of You Before But Both Came With Some Decent Material...
Here's The Quick Breakdown:

Flow: Barz
Punches: Tie
Wordplay: Barz
Personals: Torious
Opener: Barz
Closer: Barz
Overall Enjoyment: Barz

Barz Really Just Had A Better Verse In My Opinion...
Even Though They Were Pretty Even Barz Took Advantage Of That Unlimited Lines...
Wich Definatly Helped, And His Overall Content Was Just Stronger Aswell...
Aiight And Here Are Some Highlights From The Battle:

Natorious:
Want fame? as you go up hope's creek, aint got ya paddle wet
claim that i stack losses, when you aint even won a battle yet...lol
Nothing To Special, Just A Blunt Line That Got The Point Across. I Enjoyed It Even If The First Line Was Almost A Bite From 8 Mile.

This bitch is LIT, burnin his ass like dry leaves
Fuckin misperceived, like the life-span of christopher-reeves
Lol It Made Me Laugh I Just Liked It. Maybe Its Cuz Im An Asshole And You Talked About A Cripple Haha.

Barz:
i'll peel ya top - without givin a fuck if you're even ill or not-
ur like a hotel in vegas-n your crews only there to fill the slots-
Nice Witty Line With Some Pretty Decent Wordplay. Hott Bar Overall.

you cant even tie the knot - how the hell you plan on winnin-
n can ur crew roll any deeper - I thought 6 feet was federal limit-
Lolmao, I Love When You Just Completely Make Someone Look Retarded. Nice Bar.

i jus wanted to bury you 6 feet - but you're penetratin too far-
shoulda stayed 'reppin alcatraz' cuz you aint never 'escapin my bars'-
Eeeeh Kinda Played. But Since It Ties Into A Personal It Makes It A Dope Bar. Nice Shit.

heres some an advice - use ya mouse to click the elevation thread-
cause i spit lyrical leprosy - leave you with black dots like raisin bread-
Lolmao Kinda Stupid But It Made Me Laugh. Again Probally Because Im Retarded But Never The Less Nice Shit

Aiight, Thats It Nice Battle Both Of You...
Barz Just Had A Better Overall Verse In My Opinion...

Ayo If You Could Return The Favor And Check Out My New O.M.:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170702

Thanks Alot I Apreciate It...
Stay Up And Keep Elevating...
.One.

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Voted For: Flamin Barz

aight cool battle ya'll.....da reason i voted 4 barz is cuzz his ryhme scheme was betta n he wasn't sayin shit dat didn't ryhme rite no personals a couple of nice punches n multis..

verses...u had some okay shit but i didn't like da way u ryhmin..ya ryhme scheme look like u just stared rappin ya punchline concepts were okay but u just wasn't sayin it rite...fix dat ryhme scheme fam

opener-barz
structure-barz
punchlines-barz
creativity-a tie
multis-barz
wordplay-nun
finisher-barz
personals-verses
enjoyed-barz...nuff said

RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL LINKS R IN MY SIG

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

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^^he's scared.lol

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Battles
Flamin Barz vs Scene0-0..need votes
Armada Da 1287 vs Flamin Barz0-1...i'm up


Open Mics
Sanity Lost
Twizted Government Diss

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return dat favor ya'll

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^^he's scared.lol

Voted For: Notorious Verses

iight...yo both came dope with punches and stuff...but NV had more interesstin lines...FB ya shit was dope too but ya gatta work a lil more on ya structure...u repeated the 6 feet stuff and gave u a minus..u had multies...but to me they seemd slightly forced...NV besides the fact u gettin my vote u still gatta work on ya structure too...MAKE THEM OF THE SAME LENGTH..try rapin ya verse to ya self so u hear if it flows well and stuff...count the sylabs..iight...anyways NV gets my vote for a more interesstin series of punches/personals and a decent pack of wordplay....

keep it up both!!!

return honest vote...link below...thanx

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Voted For: Notorious Verses

close battle good ass battle NV got it doe his punches hit harder den flame his verse was good also jus NV shit stood out more NV work on your structure homie otha den dat yo verse won it

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Voted For: Notorious Verses

wow i dont really peep text battles much and this one was a really good one...yall both had some nice fuckin punches...FB wit that pound of fish had me crackin for days be my hats off to you on that one...but my man NV came more consistant readin his verse line for line he had slightly more punches then you na mean ...

these lines right here i think gave him the advantage...

This bitch is LIT, burnin his ass like dry leaves
Fuckin misperceived, like the life-span of christopher-reeves
Im out-lappin you the fastest, you movin slow like chilled molasses
Flow's lame, cant get the picture, so u leave nerds without dey glasses
Only thing Flamin, is the permanent press in ur computer chair
You do this for the "experience", still waiting to sprout a pubic hair....

but yeah yo yall both did yall thin but...

My vote is - Notorious Verses iight 1ne...

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