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•Para¶el• 5 100.00%
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Old 01-19-05, 06:46 PM   #1
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thanks alot uppin........................................
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Old 01-20-05, 03:03 AM   #2
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Uppin...and checkin the polls on ma boy...
 
Old 01-21-05, 01:25 PM   #3
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ight upppin.....yea i got this fo sho....yo Damian wanna just close this and give me the win?...i got you man you know it to right?...whats the point in waiting for 3 more votes it will take for ever...so we could jsut close it and its over..
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Old 01-22-05, 07:08 AM   #4
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wack drop parralell.........................................
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Old 01-22-05, 07:09 AM   #5
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parrallell you owned me aiight no doubt......dawgu need 2 increase ur fukin vocab,,,,,,,,,, rest my case......dnt start up a fukin beef again
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Old 01-22-05, 12:34 PM   #6
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why are you judging me your not suspsto use good vocab everywhere in your verse it throws the stucure and flow off then you dont even understand what a punch or metaphores are so dont say shit to me about wack drop and spell my name right if your gonna spell it...i would fuck you around Ceed..
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Old 01-22-05, 08:00 PM   #7
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aiight this is alot easier to vote on

Parrallel you had much better imaginary... this shit was aiight i could feel it. ur vocab was better then ur recent topicals. im feelin this shyt. nyce. ur structure was Dope and so was ur flow. the structure kept me interested. i give this about a 7.3/10

Damian: nope topical aint ur thing. this was wackness. ur structure was mad ugly;. ur flow was off. i couldnt even see wat u were trying to say. this was horrible. dont need to explain it. 4/10

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Old 01-22-05, 09:11 PM   #8
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decent topical battle here...

Parallel:
your vocab was good here, pretty much good story on this piece...flow was good, structure wasn't stretched overall nice story though, had a good topic

Damian:
your story was aight too, nuttin much on this one though, you had a good vocab, and the structure wasn't all stretched all over the place, and the flow was good too, but i felt that ur story on the topic wasn't as good as Parallel's though..

NO HATE TO BOTH....JUST MY OPINION
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Old 01-22-05, 09:42 PM   #9
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parellel has the emotion, vocab and all round better drop.
his rhymes are more scriptive. His imagery isactually visible.

damain-your drop is ok, but your lck substance. your rhyme need to be picked up alot. and you need to use better emotion's
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