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Roy Merkem 0 0%
Kordozar 5 100.00%
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Old 01-17-05, 02:12 AM   #16
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Thanks For Voting....UPPin For More, Remember Its just a Battle No hate
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Old 01-17-05, 02:13 AM   #17
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yo man, RETURN AN FAVOR

I'LL MUCH APPRECIATE,MAN.


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Old 01-17-05, 02:57 AM   #18
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Voted For: Kordozar

lmaoooooooooooooo oh shit...fam u got dis battle easy just off da personals....roy i wasn't feelin nothin in ya verse fam ya lines were 2 long 4 da page and ya ryhme scheme was real weak no personals or punchlines...

opener-kord..
structure-kord
punchlines-kord
wordplay-nun
multis-nun
personals-kord..datz where he won dis
enjoyed-kord....nuff said


return it links r in da sig
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Old 01-17-05, 12:44 PM   #19
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Ko I Won,Battle Gettin Closed Good Shit Tho Cus.......................
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Old 01-17-05, 01:34 PM   #20
Reloaded
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Voted For: Kordozar

woah kordozar you on fyaaaaaa that was some good shit... i liked your punches and you had some good personals... well done...

meta you had some good punches in there but your lines were a little strectched and some of your punches didnt hit as hard....

META...

Deturming by your flow I will rip you apart leaving you with nothing but bones.......
By your rhymes I can tell your Dirt, I guess we can call you Fred Flinstone......
^good opebner and nice punch... 7/10
I guess since you watch cartoons so much, You wont make it very far.....
After I blow you out, I will leave ya body like daffy on ya avatar....
^lol nice personal 7/10
I guess how you act you toss gay man salads to make a hit...
You have Gay money..I guess thats why you talk alot of shit....
^^lol thsi line was funny 8/10
Open your mouf with that salad thing makes us not listen to what you say...
Smoking that Crack, I guess Thats Why you look like Flavor Flav when he was Back in Da Day..
^not bad... second line bit stretched 6/10
Im like a lyrical disease about to sneak into one of your tiny leave open cuts...
So I guess I can feel sorry for you..Because your just a squirrel looking for a NUT...
^^ lol nice closure and good punch... 7/10

overall i thought your versee was good but some of your lines were a bit stretched and flow wasof point in some areas but it was a good verse...

KORDOZAR...

His Hand On His Sack And Than His Seed Lands On A Napkin..
Lilcutieboi=Queer,If Homo's Wass A Football Team Than He'd Be Tha Captain..
^^ lol good opener and hilarious punch... 8/10
You Hot?We'll I'll Turn Ya Iceman Like George Gervin..
Lil M.o.h Kid You Hurtin,Likes Men So He Lets Roy Merkem..
^^ lol good punch and nameplay i like that.. 7/10
Confused If He's In Tha Closet Or Not So He ? His Location..
Hides Tha Stats,Cus Dude Has More L's On His Rekord Than A Radio Station..
anotehr good punch... 8/10
Overdozed On Coke,Is What Makes Him Doper Than You..
Ya Onli Chances Of Beatin Me Iss Havin All Mih Votes Removed..
kids of fire......... 8/10
...............Try A Dq And Ya Still Wont Be Victorious..
Kid Askin Fa A Battle But Won't Stand A Chance Like Mictorious..
decent closure and good punch... 7/10

overall i thought you had a nice verse your punches were hitting hard and your structure and flow was all on point...

v/ Kordzar

i vote for you beacause you had better punches your structure was better and your flow was smoother

good battle... no hate

return the favour links in the sig... pz.
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