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Voted For: Metaskriptz

V/metaskriptz.....this was a close battle.....but my vote goes to meta cause his verse was creative wit punchs an his vocab an multi's he had sum of everything.....werdsmith u had sum good punchs but not as consistent wit them like meta u lacked in creative diss's.....
punchs=meta
multis=meta
vocab=meta
structure=tie
overall=metaskriptz
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

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Voted For: WerdSmith

lmaooo whut da fukk@meta's verse....fam half ya shit wasn't even ryhmin u lost rite there damm i thought u was a vet on dis bitch....werdsmith u got lucky fam ya verse was kind of weak 2 i didn't really c no creativity or punchlines and ya ryhme scheme was kind of weak...but u take dis cuzz meta's verse was horrible no hate fam just speakind a truth nahmean

opener-werd...i didn't get it but da shit sounded betta than meta's make u lean back like petey crack lmaooo wow

structure-werd..both of u had some stretched shit but werds looked betta

punchlines-a tie both of u had some weak shits

personals-nun from both damm....

ehuff said return da favor ya'll

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^^he's scared.lol

Yea FUckin Right...Get the Hell Out of Here...My shit Rhymes and It was better..Take your fake votes and go somewhere else with that shit...Like you Say .....DUnny

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Voted For: Metaskriptz

I think metaskriptz got dis its close but heres y i think he had better voc. flow and punches......

My Crusialnist Is Now InTacked, Plus Your Flows Is Wack and Creativity you Lack
I threw so many hard punches I made you lean Back farther then Petey Crack
........Good line didnt hit to hard 5/10
WerdSmith, about to get ripped just like Lil Flip, to call me Out real quik
Mainly You about to recieve hard Punches, So I guess you can say you was Born with a Fat Lip
........dat was iight hit a little harder than da first one 6/10
Can't denie The Truth Can't Try to fake It, Even Re-awake it, As I Even If Faggot Niggas Make it
You Aint hard as My Dick was when I seen your Momma Naked
.......played but it was iight 6/10
8 Lines is your Limit as I can see, Its Time to pay your fee, For Fake G's
So When you Turn Back around the only thing you see is the door Closing Right Behind Me,
..................good line 6/10
Overall=23/40

Wedge a math book in ya pupil, so you can literally watch the nine.
I asked him if he fucked a bitch & he got excited thinkin' of a canine!
.......haha dat was a funny line i liked dat 7/10
Ya script's are like unwanted receipt's, they just easily discarded.
...Sniff sniff, Meta's script's wreak of garbage, and i ain't saying he farted.
..............first line was good but da next one didnt hit as hard 5/10
Ya retarded, he try's to please by relentlessly poloshing up his \masters-piece/
Attracted maggot's to his comp upon dropping his
verse, obviously they thought it was a feast!
...........not feeling dat at all 4/10
I don't need a closer, cos your verse basically just self destructed.
And to add to ya rec this battle was another "No problem @ all" deducted!.
.........iight closer but wasnt dat good 6/10
overall=22/40

Return da favor please both yall..........~1~

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Voted For: Metaskriptz

Metaskriptz

My Crusialnist Is Now InTacked, Plus Your Flows Is Wack and Creativity you Lack
I threw so many hard punches I made you lean Back farther then Petey Crack
^okay opener

WerdSmith, about to get ripped just like Lil Flip, to call me Out real quik
Mainly You about to recieve hard Punches, So I guess you can say you was Born with a Fat Lip
^like it

Can't denie The Truth Can't Try to fake It, Even Re-awake it, As I Even If Faggot Niggas Make it
You Aint hard as My Dick was when I seen your Momma Naked
^lmao...good...

8 Lines is your Limit as I can see, Its Time to pay your fee, For Fake G's
So When you Turn Back around the only thing you see is the door Closing Right Behind Me,
^good closer

Overall solid drop,love your internal rhyming which definately improves your flow a lot.Structure was okay and vocab was tight,liked your wordplay to.Had some nice creative punches in there,no real bold personals but you had good creative things in your verse...Enjoyed reading it...


WerdSmith

Wedge a math book in ya pupil, so you can literally watch the nine.
I asked him if he fucked a bitch & he got excited thinkin' of a canine!
^haha,funny shit...

Ya script's are like unwanted receipt's, they just easily discarded.
...Sniff sniff, Meta's script's wreak of garbage, and i ain't saying he farted.
^liked 1st line,not feeling 2nd though

Ya retarded, he try's to please by relentlessly poloshing up his \masters-piece/
Attracted maggot's to his comp upon dropping his
verse, obviously they thought it was a feast!
^hmmm,doesn't do trick for me...

I don't need a closer, cos your verse basically just self destructed.
And to add to ya rec this battle was another "No problem @ all" deducted!.
^good closer

Good drop from you to: flow,structure and vocab were straight on point.Wordplay was nice,had funny and creative punches/personals which even made me laugh here and there. Too bad you kinda fell of towards the end in my opinion,no hate though because I thought this was very close battle but my vote goes to MetaSkriptz...

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