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Voted For: Copywrite

arright I thought both peices were at least average, w/ one being much better.. Final- your verse was descriptive, but the flow of the verse was real choppy- you didn't have the imagery copywrite brought.... it was almost like you both approached the topic in a very similar way, but copywrite had a much more descriptive, and worded verse... flow wise i found it stronger... and like I said I think he had a better grasp of what direction he wanted the verse to go. not bad either of you- but I vote copywrite.

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Haha dude you had vocab and nothing else. No flow, very little emotion, and basically you just listed off random things. Who doesn't know topicals? I gotta say you. Go to the poetry league, you will do well in there. I spit in the face of people who think topicals=vocab

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Voted For: Copywrite

ok yall both my mans so im gonna give a good honest explained vote here final good drop but you lacked good imagery you had imagery but it was all over the place and very confusing to keep up i also didnt like your ending vocab was good struture was well.6/10
copywrite the 100 name man anyways you had excellent vocab and struture was a lil streched here .imagery was dope though you brought me through mad levels without leaving my comp dopeness here ender was fire also nice all through i really liked this shit your better imagery made a better verse since imagery wins topicals.8/10
good job to both ill have some open soon

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Voted For: final

Aiight look. Final got this battle, Copywright, your shit was ok but I think that you were relying on vocab WAY too much.. Verses sort of get annoying when people just try to fit in as much vocab as they can..

Final your getting better man, but I think you should look at using different perspectives in your topicals, like what I've seen from you is mainly rambling on about describing feelings.. Try and use some perspectives like telling a story from an on-looker and shit like that.. But always try and teach people things with your verses.. Thats what wins topicals..

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