Voted For: Untraceable

Hot Sauce
hmm alright k the stucture was amd ugly putting ~~~ in there just wreaks the stucture and your flow was weak also the vocab was decent but still weak your punches werent hitting i just aint feeling them you gotta do somethign to give them flavour add some more funny clips n it will be funny and dope. no hate

Untraceble:
i liked that ncie stucture the flow was more then great your punches just hit they were nice and funny just thought you had the better hitting punches soem nice vocab at most parts of it the creativty was just soemthing i couldnt even think of nice verse pretty one sided to. pz

Opener: Untraceable
closer: Untraceable
vocab: untraceable
stucture: untraceable
flow: untraceable
punchlines: untraceable
creativty: untraceable

VOTE: Untraceable

rtf: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=177669

thanks for voting guys......thankfully someone finally did.......votes will be returned honeslty
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Voted For: Hot Sauce

Aight, nice battle here from y'all

Untrace, verse was nice, structure an flow was on point, lacked in the punchline department, but besides ya punches, everythin was pretty decent i guess...

Hot:
verse was SICK
Structure was fuckin everywhere tho! haha
but ya definately came the stronger, IMPROVE THAT AWFUL STRUCTURE, An your dope as fuck!
nice personals, nice punches, creativity an wordplay was off its chain 4sho dirty

both came strong, hot took advantage of the 30 lines
Untrace had the better structure
but hots wordplay n puns killed it, not hatin untrace an RTF In my battle vs Black Queen, its on EFL Right now, thanks

Peace out n stay up y'all two

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Voted For: Untraceable

yeah, here's what i see

hot sauce, not a bad drop, had the multies in there, which is good, but you didnt have to use them all the way through, cause some shit was weak and seemed like fillers....and, yeah, alot of your mutlies come off as weak, because you use them so much, that some aren't as good as others, so i suggest, not using them everywhere, plus, your structure wasn't all that great, in parts i had a tough time following it....but not a bad drop, didnt think you really had that many personals, most were punches that were either played or weak, so, you need to work on that....but you had nice vocab and wordplay, especially in the second verse, but i just dont think you came that hard

untraceable.....flow and structure, nothing wrong at all with those....vocab, nothing special, wordplay, decent.....had good creativity playin off his name, complexity, nothing special....what separated you two, i think, was your consistency dissin your opponent, not all your punches/personals were hard, but you had them coming every line, which is good, and you had a few nice ones in there, like the "everyone run" line, haha, i laughed...so overall, i thought you came harder, had effective punches....personals owned him, (made a big difference), and thats why your getting my vote

v/untraceable....wordizzle

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