Voted For: *Troop*

whoooo damm dis was a good battle ya'll..no hate or nothin but i gotta go with troop cuzz of his ryhme scheme and his shit was more consistant and he had some hott punchlines...i.e ya shit was type hott like dat troop line but dat was it basically nahmean i wasn't feelin ya ryhme scheme and some of ya lines stretched a lil datz cool tho but overrall troop shit was hottah........

opener-troop creative punch......i.e good ryhme scheme but wasn't really feelin da punch dat much

structure-troop his shit was neat.....i.e ya lines strectched a lil

punchlines-troop basically every line was a punch

personals-troop

he takes it...return da favor ya'll links in da sig

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^^he's scared.lol

Bumpin this shit..................
*Nuff Said Chump*

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WHAT???

how dont u feel my opener punch???

..ima pop ya vocal cord like from behind stealing a neckless...
ur lines BULLSHIT..they Build up Nothing like a won game of Tetris..

What is it u dont feel??
its creative, and a good hit, the game is about connecting and making a straight line, if u won da game then u have no lines??? get it??

danm son and my lines streched???

i think ya just love saying that about my verse,
cuz it seems like peeps always hate'in saying my lines is streched.....
when they aint........

Its ok man my linez used 2 be stretched 2 when i Sucked
But i neva sucked as much as u Muthafucka

Talked all that shit and got Knocked Out

Damn!!!!

*Nuff Said*

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Voted For: *Troop*

T.R.OO.P
Alright THis Was One Sided Troop Had This Battle His Punches Where On Target And Was Hitting, His Rhyme Scheme Was There, Also Had Some Good Vocabulary, Structure Was Decent His Lines Was All Lined Up, WordPlay Nice, This Verse Was Creative, And That's What You Need For Battles These Days,Also Had Personals Which I Felt Was Hard Hitting, From My Prespective This Battle Was One Sided

I.E.
Alright Coz First Off??
Where Was Your Structure? It Was Chaotic Kid, You Need To Start Lining Your Bars Up To Match, Your Rhyme Scheme Was Totally Whacked, WordPlay Hmm, I See Some Recylced Ish In Here Man, You Need Some New Vocabulary. Coz This Is Getting Played, Alos Personals Wasn't Quite Hitting You Need To Work On That, Punches, Gosh Dawg That Needs Help Coz Not One Even Hit Troop Close Enuff To Damage, Any Way Elevate Some More Pimpin

Vote=Troop
Return The Favor Me Vs Death Only, Link In My Sig......
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^^^^ what was ya other name?????

befor u changed it????

anyways upp'in to get this ova with...........

U damn righ uppin 2 get ya 34th Loss u sorry fuck

*Nuff Said*

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Not enough posts to vote but if it means anythin I give this to T.R.OO.P... Redbull and bacardi line was hot, so was the drop shells punch.

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checkin polls...........solid drop fam....you got this

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Its nuthin 2 me 2 ruin Records......................

*Nuff Said*

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Voted For: intensify effect


..ima pop ya vocal cord like from behind stealing a neckless...
ur lines BULLSHIT..they Build up Nothing like a won game of Tetris..
good shit

troop ya punches couldnt be "hot" if u "burnt-ya-fist"
im bugg'in?, i have yet to "Tear-a-Ris" ya like a "Muslim Extremists"
oo shit i get it good shit

my punches'll leave u to grow fucked up on Rv like a retarded Fetus,
N if this win was a walk down the block, u'll struggle to crawl like a parapalegics...
hahaha

N like lowis lane im glad u'r here to get the scoop
cuz u'r like a news-reporter in iraq, still not yet concider a TROOP....
nice play off hes name

LOOK, S.M bound to fall like a avalanch call from mother nature...
and i maybe AMP, but u'r only shockin when ya set off ya pace-maker..... BITCH....
ok ending u had way better ending befor but it was aight
good verse besides the ending






Stop ya Ignorance Ya Not in the Sindicate Your Simplify Reflects
Slowly Mixing RedBull..... and Bacardi still wont Intensify Effects
decent shit there

Your not Gifted believe me ya Battles are Poo ya Drop Tells
Mishandeling Egg Cartons is the only time u Dropped Shells
played, concept been said 1,000 times already

From the Check in you was Nervous Basically Rippin ya Nails
U defeat Me? Ya when Anerexics Finally start Tippin tha Scales
preety good

I.E Recycles other Lyrix he might as well start 2 "Lease Raps"
Ghandi on a Me vs U audio Still wouldnt make "Peace Tracks"
i wasnt feeling this bar

Believe Me Rv knows ya Lyrix are Shit i guess u Rhyme Bloated
U cant See Me .... like Jogging thru an Intersection Blind Folded
haha good shit

You got Jr Freeze on His Knees 2 Please so u hittin High Notes
This a Misbalanced Battle like 300 Pounders hittin Tight Ropes
...Nuff Said that Bitch...
ok ending but it could of been better

ya both aint have no good ending but I.E had less weak hits then troop so imma go with I.E

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lol stupid ass...thats not a vote..u didnt explain shit
nice Nutt ride try...

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