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02-16-05, 08:24 PM
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IP: EB8D 9EAC
Voted For: Technical
yo technical got this battle easy..... killer.... you structure was messed up man....make every bar 2 lines instead of 1....you have potential to be pretty good in the future...but you just have to get the basics down right now...your punches could have been worded better....but some of them were pretty decent....also use more multis and metas in your verse....add a lil wordplay...... Technical got this because of better punchlines....structure....and wordplay......he played off of killers name pretty well.....which also gave him a good edge in the battle....punches just hit a lot harder and the whole verse was more creative...
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02-16-05, 08:26 PM
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IP: 5043 32F4
Voted For: Technical
KillerBee ight yo i wasent getting where you were trying to go with your punches they sound so grade 1, add some bigger words in there and deffin the flow and it might sound a lil better and damn the stucture was mad off and the flow fell just sometimes not to much but no hate i just damn you need work..pz Technical yo that was better then the last battle i seen like the stucture is alot better here and the flow is alot better the vocab is still at a decent range not so bad and the punchlines were just killer dope, theres nothign i would change about your verse Opener: Technical Closer: Technical vocab: technical stucture: technical flow: technical punchlines: Technical win: Technical |
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02-16-05, 08:27 PM
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I walk & walk over you
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This was feedback posted for Technical
IP: 8F79 1C95
Checking Polls Nice Drop Tech........................
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02-16-05, 08:29 PM
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IP: 9637 1D00
Voted For: Technical
this was pretty easy to judge... Tech took this NO PROBLEM Bee idk who u r but ur rhymes are basic as fuck and thats sad... Tech had good wordplay and a bigger vocab which shows elevation, something Bee needs to do alot lol no hate just elevate... HOLLA BACK 1
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