Voted For: The Black Plague

hot, i know u got better skillz than that. i seen u come way harder fam...i wasnt feelin ur drop this time my nig. i think u came way to soft. some of ur punches werent hittin, and i didnt see any creative shit that made me laugh in there. i thought u were guna bring it. yo verse was ight, but i wasnt feelin it...ive seen better homie
TBP-u came ight. i really wasnt feelin ur verse that much. i like yo style tho. i think u came off with tha metas in this one. punches were ight, but wordplay was tha highlight in this one for u...shit was nice yo. i think u should work on ur structure. like, u started off wierd in words per line, then u just switched up yo whole style, which made ur verse seem kinda off...but overall, it was nice, and got my vote
overall- this was a aight battle, but i think TBP came off, and a lil ahrder, and got tha vote...hot, i seen better fam...keep elevating, and hit up audio. i kno u got gas...

yall plz RTF on battle link in sig against Konfliktz...too many battles is gettin slept on, and plz make yo vote explain, cause i took tha time out to explain this n vote on it...


good drop from both ya...keep ya head up, and keep elevating...

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Voted For: hotshh!

I gotta go wit hot shhh

this battle kinda turned into a best bar battle

Read my verse and now u got “punches up the ass” like fistin pornographies
My last name is “wright”, but even in the phone book u aint listed on top of me
WOW...NAH I WASN'T FEELIN THIS PUNCH A LIL OUTRAGEOUS
When im rippin you, its no wrong way to “do it” like fuckin a reeses
Nigga got you sweatin worse than Michael Jackson at chuckie cheeses
DIDN'T QUITE RHYME AND MJ JOKES ARE PLAYED
I don’t fuck around.. Battled me and got dropped like Alias from the fox network
Sayin you busy wit bills, but u more worried about which D/R u gonna give head first
I LIKED THIS LINE NICE PUNCH AND NICE SET UP
You a faggot, wakin up wit heat condoms in ya ass, but still don’t drop hot shit
Claimin to be the medicine man, but got a taste of yaself cuz I know you not sick
SET UP WAS ONCE AGAIN WEIRD BUT THE PUNCH WAS NICE
Ya Shit Not hot enough for 9th degree, the dude burned you alive like Joan of Arc
Battlin headin upstream without a paddle, hopin you keep floatin like Noah’s Arc
NICE SET UP BUT USING THE SAME LAST WORD TO RHYME...NAH
Duckin our battle, knew when you lost to me you’d be catchin more shit than a toilet
If they made crews for dudes interested in mass suicide, you’d benefit from joinin it
THIS WAS YOUR BEST LINE GOOD CLOSER

U from Shut the 'Hell' Up,U ugly bitch, yeah we noticed It..
I tried posting ya pic but da Modem refused to Load Da Shit
BAD ATTEMPT AT A PERSONAL BUT THE PUNCH LANDED SORTA
Heres the Link and if U kept it moving.......Smart Decision
Cuz if dis was fashion based He'd be the tightest Man Living
NICE PUNCH TECHNICALLY A PERSONAL
Me getting burned by Black Plague? No, dats a Bad Answer
Dats like 'Smokie' Fighting forest fires and Catching Cancer
????? AT LEAST THE SET UP WAS GOOD
To speak the Truth, I hate U, Asshole get ya shit Pushed In
U aint a bitch nigga...U twice the Pussy like the Bush Twins
YOU 2 REALLY LIKE SHIT...GOOD PUNCH THOUGH
You make me sick so Im feeling ya Name Loud and Clear
Liike Flash Rain.. Plagues only drop once then Disappear
WOW...MIRACOULOUSLY CLOSE TO MY PUNCH IN THE MULTIS LEAGUE AGAINST HIM....GOOD PUNCH THOUGH
You just bombed and I aint talking bout what Flex'll Do
Incredible...... Your Alias just Lost his Respect for You..
GREAT CLOSER YOUR BEST LINE

Duckin our battle, knew when you lost to me you’d be catchin more shit than a toilet
If they made crews for dudes interested in mass suicide, you’d benefit from joinin it
VS.
You just bombed and I aint talking bout what Flex'll Do
Incredible...... Your Alias just Lost his Respect for You..

V/hotshhhh

(thinks to self)wow i did not just bite 9th's voting style....ehh well good battle yall this was close

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Voted For: The Black Plague

this was a very good battle but here's my opinion:
opener: both
vocab: black plague
structure: both
multis: black
closer: black
this battle was a close call but black just came a lil harder & hit wit more punches in the battle; hotshh u step up ur wordplay & elevate a lil more
make sure 2 return the favor

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Voted For: hotshh!


Openor=Hotshh Decent Punch And And Personal
Personals=Hotshh,Had Better Personals
Punches=Tie,Both Ok Punches
Vocab=Tpg,Had More Vocab
Strukture=Hotshh His Verse Wasnt Stretched
Closer=Wow,That Last Line Ko'ed Him Lmfao

Hotshh Came Harder And He Put More Effort Into His Verse

/V Hotshh! Rtf................

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