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02-20-05, 04:46 PM
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IP: 5043 32F4
Voted For: Skriptz
LyricalFlowz hmm not bad i seen some ncie lines at most parts but you didnt really use any metas to complete your personals well i didnt see them maybe if you did try making it more obvious cause you probably used hard words that didnt quite work but other den the lack of metas the verse was not that bad the rest was ight no hate Skriptz i liked the way you used lots of metaphores in there and created tight punches with a few personals but there wasnt much comedy in there but it wasnt bad the stucture was decent and the flow was great but what most stood out were the punches probably peace opener: skriptz closer: lyrical punches: skriptz personals: skriptz stucture: tie flow: tie vote/ Skriptz |
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02-20-05, 05:21 PM
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IP: 258C A279
aight...uppin this
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02-20-05, 07:18 PM
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Voted For: Skriptz
gotta go with skriptz lyricalflowz....alot of played shit in there, like your closer, the 'bigger than you line', boxing gloves one.... weak pucnhes too...like the tool shed one and even the opener was a little dull....overall, not bad of a spit, but you need to come out harder against he's skriptz, more creativity and complexity, better thought out lines....flow didnt go so smoothly throughout your verse...and you could up the vocab a little skriptz....took this one all the way, little sloppy on the flow i thought near the start, but thats about it, nice punches, opener and the ash tray ones were the best....so overall: better punches, couple harder personals and complexity... v/skriptz
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