I liked it...and people are talkin bout it so I figured why not chek it out...it was creative definately and it was different..I think it was in a way funny but I wasn't laughing..but I see how it could be...anyway it's aiight 7/10.

return the favour yo...\/

heat of the moment- adrenaline and d-bagz NOK x-clusive...

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hold on...i was just about to go to your new open mic, but its about your son? how old are you?

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im 15...he 8 months...my lil nigga sick as hell wit tha flu right now...but peep dat shit homie

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aiight fa sho....ill leave feed back so dont trip...

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iight.....................

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uppin...wont be uppin this much longer...

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i have to see you get an A+ for creativity and effort...but this piece disapointed me...not because it wasn't good..but because it was so hyped up...i heard from everyone and there mothers that this was so funny....and everything else.and it wasn't that funny...it was just about chinese food..nothins funny about food...the last bar was humerous..but not clever enough for me to call it funny....this wasn't bad...just not what i expected at all..stay up tho

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Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.

"watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox

The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew

haha really? everybodys talkin about it?...ha...but um yeh thanks for the feed...maybe you woulda thought more of it if it wasnt so hyped ya feel...pz

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nah..like i said..i don't think it was bad...the hype doesn't make it worse..it's just a dissapointment...the piece itself didn't disapoint me..the fact that peoiple hyped it up disapoints me...btw...check some of my OM's...like.....100 years from now..love letter...reincarnation..any of those

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Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.

"watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox

The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew

pretty good i have to say but the flow was what kinda fell off in my point of veiw or im usto my type of flow but the stucture is great the imagery is fuckin GOOD the creativty in some of that shit was un thinkable for me not to much vocab but this is chiese food your talkin about haha, but yo the story was good just on topical well, i was feeling this

rtf on my one with prilifik links in the sig ight, pz

This was awsome, it was funny as hell lmfao. Props to you on this.

aiight ill rtf when i get a chance...but for the time being...uppin..

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nice shit good creative azz shit

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haha thnx fam...hot open mic comin soon.....uppin..

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