word, don't take this wrong, cuz not everyone likes the same thing, and I usually love your om's or topicals, but I didn's really feel this, I didnt like how it was done, and it seemed rushed to end it, it shoulda been longer, rhyming was dope, but it needed more time, more lines, it felt like you had an original verse and just started cutting lines to make it shorter you know, but anyways, I'd say 7/10

rtf, links in the sig

I THOUGHT THIS WAS REALLY, koo..puts things into perspective...
story line n ya whole aspect of the concept was protrayed real well
it was a good read in-vision...i was feeling the body of the verse more so
then anything else....good job..............8.9/10

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!