Voted For: Linguistics

oh dear.....

i find it a bit of an insult that i actually have to describe my vote but hear goes:

Linguistics: opener was good, nice punch, hit hard. Closer was real good! nice way to end the verse, good metaphor in a hard punch. Overall, ya flow was good, structure was tight and the punches were consistently good throughout, with some good metaphors.

Black: Opener wasnt really good, the punch wasnt making a lot of sense and didnt hit hard at all. Closer was even worse, stretched line, bad punch and wasnt hitting him at all. Overall you have a lot of elevating to do and attle some more newbies before you go at people more experienced, thats the best way to get better.

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Voted For: Linguistics

ok Ill break it down like this

Black
im bout to kill dis fool for talkin shit like he big time wit big ryhmes
im off tha dome, u give dome for a piece of tha pie
wasnt really felling that
i got bitches cuz im a pimp, u look like a chimp
i'll stomp ya punk ass, have ya walkin limp
haha
look at how i do dis, u aint worth tha battle
go to tha graveyard and pick a spot cuz when im done, u'll be goin there after dis battle
Didnt rhyme

Linguisticks
I dont gotta come hard, just to trash this herb
take the BL off, add a W, and thats just word!
lol dope]
got a death wish, commit suicide, gotta wittness here
u like hustlers at mormon camps, have no buisness here
[B] na
ya toast kid, n' we know ya shits wack and ghost written
cant be dope, cuz we know if its deicent, its mostly bitten
aiii
cant say your witty or smart, dued you'll never be felt
cuz u'r names black but its in white, you confusin' ya self
haha good one
havent even battled yet, so stop lyin, sayin u tight
when u wanted to follow in my footsteps......
.....................but didnt know I was ridin' a bike
ok

Id have to say linguistics won this easy no offence black you need to elivate you displayed little wit, keep at it though.

return the favour plz

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my bad the link fucked up http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=180104

y am i not winnin?
damn dickridaz.
i won dis battle!

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Voted For: Linguistics

damn...ling ripped it.......he had the punches the personals structure everything
black u need to work on your structure first and your vocab and your creativity and complexity......try to make your bars match up and da syllabels in them match up....

linguistics return the vote me vs mista authentic....im up 2-1
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Voted For: Linguistics

I dont gotta come hard, just to trash this herb
take the BL off, add a W, and thats just word!

^^^DATZ ENUFF RITE THERE FAM.....

dis shit was real wun sided

opener-ling
structure-ling
punchlines-ling
creativity-ling
personals-ling
finisher-ling
enjoyed-ling......black whut da fukk was dat fam lol i shouldn't really have 2 explain dis shit

RETURN DA FAVOR LINKS IN MY SIG...or i will take away dis vote

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^^he's scared.lol