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Voted For: Kesse

BLACK
im bout to do u in, like da mob did dat bitch named roy
killa? u jus santanin, u a dancin boy
no
im bout to spit in ya face for any remark u might say boy
i now u gone drop weak bars like u always do, youngin go play wit ya toys
okay pretty decent
i will shot u, not in a net way but lethal
my injection will leave u limpin like i seen u
nah, extend ur flow here
u half way crook, i know dat u shook up from dis rock
so i cross over to tha next nigga dat dare to test tha prince of hip-hop
decent, here punch could’ve been harder


[font=brushscrd]Kesse[/font
your just a typical newb, trashing around like you be owning this site
like it says in your name...in this battle theres no chance you'll see light
good punch
thank god for you though... you taught us bad equals sexy, real swell
but if what your saying is true, then your verse will be hot as hell
uhh, kinda good here, punch was okay
"license to kill", please, look at your record, nothing, no progress
for someone with that little posts....the shit coming out is at an excess
decent
if whackness was a plague, then man, you were severely stricken
and your rhymes are like a poor mans cupboards....merely slim pickens
nope, not feelin this one though
what makes the perfect song, shit buddy, you wouldn't have a clue
but i'll tell what makes the worst verse....DUH!! anything by you
good persona & punch here

Overall Kesse took this one
Punches were harder
Nice vocab, the flow was good
& the structure was pretty decent
but overall Kesse took this one

RTF on my battle with Buck.Shot, Kesse

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word, i will RTF, sometime, so, yeah, upppin......

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Voted For: Kesse

im bout to do u in, like da mob did dat bitch named roy
killa? u jus santanin, u a dancin boy
.........pretty damn bad opener
im bout to spit in ya face for any remark u might say boy
i now u gone drop weak bars like u always do, youngin go play wit ya toys
.....the content is way too basic, raise ya vocab up
i will shot u, not in a net way but lethal
my injection will leave u limpin like i seen u
u half way crook, i know dat u shook up from dis rock
so i cross over to tha next nigga dat dare to test tha prince of hip-hop
.....no hate intended but you'll need alot of elevation to be taken serious
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im not going to break down keese verse cuz its obvious he won this, in my opinion wasted good lines, but he won

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return the favor please

word, thanks fo feed.....^battle closed....upppin...;l

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Voted For: Kesse

Kesse
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. you attempted some wordplay.. the line about his name was pretty good.. you connected a few punches.. but yo, you should stop using links.. they are turning played.. that took away from the two punchlines you used them in.. other then that.. that was a good name flip for a personal..

BLACK
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. no good wordplay.. at all.. none of your punches connected.. either you were just making statements or dropping complete ass.. either way, nothing of yours hit.. no good personals..

Overall
both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. neither had multis.. Kesse had better wordplay, more connecting punches and a better personal.. so basing off of that.. Kesse wins in a landslide..

VOTE - KESSE

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BLACK~your verse seemed rather simple, the vocab, and the flow of it, nothing really stood out here, no hate, but you need some elevation with multies and wordplay...and i dont think "santanin" is a word, although, i know what you were trying to say, but good attempt, just need more practice..1
KESSE~pretty decent opener, nice wordplay and link usage, although unneccessary, because you already are using multies and strong vocab in this verse, nice personals on him, i like the "cupboards..merely slim pickens "bar..i got a chuckle,aha, funny closer, i think you toook this battle easily...good job, keep it up.1

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