Voted For: Cincanatus

good battle....from cincanatus

cin-good opener...shit got my attention,flow was on point like always...decent wordplay coulda done better....punches hit pretty hard..some connected...personals were alright in yea drop...structure was on point...multis was lacking..overall:7/10

liguinstics-OK opener...coulda done better,flow was alright nuttin to special...punches came weak...structure was bad overall...vocab was in good use...personals was lacking...and multis were aight...overall:6/10

v/cincanatus....

Voted For: Cincanatus

good battle here chums, this is how i see it

cincanatus....thought you came real strong, had nice punches and personals in there, wordplay and vocab were aight....just flow and structure were a little off in some areas, 2nd last bar seemed a little stretched, but you still came on top

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Say Virginia Got No Basements? Well Ain't That Where Ya Located
Contradicting Ya Self, Like Miss Understood Sentences Translated
^that shit was tight, same with finisher, thought those were the ones that hit hardest

Linguistics....thought you came out a little weak, some punches were definately played, verse lacked complexity...had a weak opener, flow and structure were nice though, no problems there, just thought cincanatus had the harder punches/better wordplay and vocab.....but you did have a few nice lines....

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u worse than I thought, need a clue, circle this loss
he been on my dick so long, even my purple rubbed off
^^fuckin laughed at that shit...

good battle but v/cincanatus

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Voted For: Cincanatus

im votin fo cincanate cuz he had better punches, dope last line, dope flow, n linguistics verse, i wuz readin it thinkin "i hope its soon tha end" it didnt really keep my atention, nom sizlaxin? but both wuz good, no hate linguistics or howeva u spell ur name. werd

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im gonna have to give this to you considering the fact that you owned him, lol

LING...shit was decent but was kinda good at the same time, some shit was just played fillers but the atcual shit that hit, hit real hard, that one about his sig was dope, but you need to work on your strucutre , he had a more solid structutre than you
but good shit, the closer was dope..
FATAL... your shit was decent also but you was feeding off his verse which makes you loose, how you fed? i dont know, but the fact you did was very wack, but other than that it was decent but your whole verse was a bunch of fillers, work on your punches yo

Voted For: Linguistics

Cincanatus:
Lingustics....Kid Made An Name That He Couldn't Pronounce..
After This Battle You'll Be 4-2 And In Need Of New Accounts..
gay
Ya Career Is Based On, Retarded Kids, Concenrating On Test..
Claim To Be Dope,But I Checked Ya Status You Battles No Vets
blah
Say Virginia Got No Basements? Well Ain't That Where Ya Located
Contradicting Ya Self, Like Miss Understood Sentences Translated
wow, wack metaphor yo
You Keep Riding My Dick Coz You No Showed And Gained A Loss
I Pimp Smack Ya Worse Then A Secretary Who Refrained From His Boss
ok
Insinuated You'd Beat Me...Sherlok Holmes Couldn't Of Told Ya
I's Gonna Expose Ya Whackness But Ya Provided Ya Own Esposer
better

Linguistics:
been awhile u miss me? put u out of your misery
what kinda herb brags about a noshow victory
ok
trust me i'll gitcha, the truth must not have hitcha
cuz just like ya sig......
anything to do wit recording is out of the picture
nice
u worse than I thought, need a clue, circle this loss
he been on my dick so long, even my purple rubbed off
blah
C i'm cuttin ya head off, leave it bloody and raw
watch the quick wrist movments, cause i'll arkansas
dope wordplay... but is he from arkansaw?
part this dog, from large ego, but back to the basics
and i'd try to reach ya level...........
...............but virginia aint got basements
good lol

Ya, I have to go with Linguistics in this, very one sided, he killed it, why it's 4-1 against him just straight amazes me... but ya, he had some dope lines, definalty a lot wittier, and had a good wordplay bar

Cincanatus, try checking legends of RV verses and elevate off that, you had decent bar but thats it, it was an ok try though

v/linguistics

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Voted For: Cincanatus

I was feelin fatals more since he hit with more personals and punches....structure was nice bothsides...flow was tite and on point also....multis lack in this battle coulda done better....

v/Fatal Lyrics....since he had better personals and punches...both need to ELAVATE alot....yep

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