Voted For: TheFlowIsSick

ok you win this shit, very easy

DOT, your strucuture was too short, but i guess it was good, you also need to use better metaphores and better wordplay, you could also re-word some things to make them hit harder, but decent just not good enough for him, take me time to prewrite(if you do)
but decent you still got mad time to elevate

FLOW, good shit but not that good, just alot better than him, so word you win, all you have to do is stop with the self glorifacation and you will be alot better, lol
i know hes wack but yo, lol

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yo, j dot we can battle if you want, its up to you

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shut up LF youre just hatin on me cuz i beat you in the tag team tourney and also he won because he didnt have links? its called a personal u fucking idiot lmao.. i dont even care that he has the vote from you i care because youre a noob voter with that sorry ass excuse for a honest vote

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Voted For: TheFlowIsSick

J DOT: Verse was pretty good. Flow was on pretty much throughout.... Punches were on and off... wordplay left something to be desired and I think it needed a slight vocab lift.

FlowIsSick: Try not to use links... Cos its not really a good personal if you need to put a link there. I personally dont click on the links, but i got the personals nevertheless... watch that for next time. Your flow was nice all the way through. Never fell off and the multis helped it along. Wordplay was nice. I felt that your punches hit harder as well...

Both of your structures were fine.

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Voted For: J DOT

And you cant ‘son’ nobody, cause you could barley get it up
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only line that isn't played in the entire battle, j dot wins

return the favor and if you do, i'll drop on a better battle worth readin of either of yours and write enough not to get it dq'd

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wtf was that. if you dont return tha shit, ima be pissed!

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uppin this shit... herb ass voters better get real..

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