checkin the polls but though omb took this................

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Voted For: One M.B.

oneman band takes this easly, no need to explain myself

OMB, you had the wordplay and the mutlies and the metaphores and the strucuture.
lol
you had everything needed for a battle, your punches and personals could have been alot better, but you just need to keep on battling and shit, that is the only way to get better, also your punches didnt hit that hard, and their where alot of fillers in this battle
KEsse your fucking verse was so strectched it is not even funny, man you need to work on your strcuture for real and work on your meta[hores, everythi gwas kinda wack, but once you fix your strucuture then you will b e better

vote=OMB

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Voted For: One M.B.

one fag kid bite off my with that saddles and paddles line and was wack punches aint hit neither did the disses personals were very weak here as well aint do nothing strauture was all over fucking horrible.omd great struture good multis which lead to decent punches which had major effect and hurt ya oppenant here and got you the win.

both return honest votes on link in sig

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^ fuck that, i dont bite lines.......but whatever.........that vote mainly consisted of you no knowing who i am/dr.....but whatever, i thought i would try, its not like OMB hasnt' sonned anyone before so dont act fuckin surprized, pz

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Dont worry bout cali... lol... he always accuses people of biting... Hes accused me even

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yeah, i guess since we used the same word, but used different rhymes, i bit from him....hah

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Voted For: One M.B.

this was one sided the whole way

kesse...work on ya multis and punches more kid
its like u were jus text freestyling
that probly woulda sounded nice in audio
but this is tex....u have 2 be able 2 spit it
in tex and audio...thats how ya drop should be
develop some more personals
do a lil research on ya comp...makes it easier kid

one
u had everything pretty much raped up
king of multis of course
nice similies
and perfect structure
but um work on ya punches a lil more
those need 2 stand out
it got lost in ya vocab and multis

Vocab Multies Personals Punches

keyz 2 success kidz......

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