Voted For: SpeatsBeats

Aight this was a pretty close battle....

Assasin:
ya had some aight lines here n there
pretty decent flow, structure was way off, some lines over stretched others, an it took the sting out of the punches, thats your fault an thats why i aint gon vote 4 u

Speats:
you certainly improved homie, few decent personals, wordplay was on point, creativity was good too
structure looked like a damn box lol, it flowed much better too...
nothin was stretched, an it made your puns n personals connect alot better, so u get my vote

Could y'all RTF in any of my battles ya see on front lines?
thanks

Peace

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Voted For: AssAsInS-eVolve!

Mettas=evloves
punches=evolves
wordplay=evolves

His verse was tighter overall Allthough his structure was a bit fucked he had stronger punches

Voted For: SpeatsBeats



beats
got this 4sho...
Came sick with the multies an a few decent personals here n there, punches were nice too, overrall besides the way u structure your rhymes, there aint much i can fault, nice verse....9/10


eVolve
l, ya structure was everywhere too
dont seperate bars like that man
gotta be more creative with the rhymes u choose ta use
Overall 6/10



no hate, just be more creative

beats got this for the overrall better verse

RTF In ANY of my battles ya see floatin around on front lines or whatever

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thanks to errbody,one more up-pin this shit.......

comeon............................................