If ya check my battle with bablon (link in sig) I been using that style mane, just changed it a little.......

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dude...just face it you loss.. just write a better verse next time..

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battle me regular style no topic and see why R.V cant fuck with no other sites my record on the other site is 27-4 -10 ko's u aint ready topic aint me but i do them, regular battles wow u aint ready for me so leave it at that

^^ Am i like to be scared of that?......Show me if you dope ENUFF to battle me again, battle some Decent VET's topical head'z then get at me..........Shit 2-4 Like a give a fuck.

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dude.. ur ego is big as hell..battle me then.. look at my rec.. 0-37.. i guess i suck huh.. topical then.. i ain't good at text.. so topical.. Topic w/e u pick or hit me up in aim: six Five Oe

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Topical-

Vs Heat (10 lines)

Voted For: PoEtIc~ViZiOnZ

Poetic- i thought that you took this one with ease.you had better vocab all around and your structure was more organized. i thought that you had alot of good aspects like there was good imagery and alot of good emotion in this....

Heat.- you had an alright drop.. i jus thought you lacked in the honesty and emotion part... you could have done alot more with your drop. your vocab was good.. your structutre wasn't as appealing as P's but overall you had a nice drop

Vote//PoEtIc~ViZiOnZ--i voted for PV for having a better drop all around .. better vocab better structure better message

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Voted For: PoEtIc~ViZiOnZ

good shit from both...both had tha ill shit verses...but i was feeling PV...alittle more..ya story was sick and you stayed on topic..good shit from both..my vote goes to PV.....good luck to both

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upp'in this battle and why i gotta have like 50 letters to reply?

Voted For: PoEtIc~ViZiOnZ

Heat: wasn't feeling your approach on the topic, it'z like u didn't understand what u were writing about, it'z like u couldn't find a good balance between basic and complex vocab. Emotion wasn't shown, needs serious elevation...
Flow was decent (might be improved with multis), you stayed consistent throughout the whole
thing, just left me guessing...betta luck next time!


Poetic~Visions: very strong topical,loved your twist on the topic.Had your flow and vocab on lock,good multis here and there...had sum good imagery with the "down to earth"-attitude
which I was definetely feeling. Absolutely loved your ending, had inspiring vibe over it and the emotion was raw. Solid drop!

My vote goes to PoEtIc~V (no hate Heat ) 'cause I was feeling his drop a little more,especially the sense of reality and raw emotion to it. Wasn't close at all and his topical stood out more 2 me

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Voted For: PoEtIc~ViZiOnZ

heat~hmm,this reminded me more of an open mic type drop,it wasnt bad at all, but it seemed to be different, not really my style of drop,but nice twist on the end, even tho it seemed you were talking gang hype, still not bad drop,but not my thing,no hate., i think you could have done better with this topic..1
poetic visionz~nice story line, your vocabulary was good, some spelling errors but they were minor, still,i liked the direction you took the topic in, nice structure and setup, good job..1..voteoetic visionz

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Voted For: PoEtIc~ViZiOnZ

PoEtIc~ViZiOnZ- Verse was nice...so was your punches....Had some nice sick azz personals also....Structure was decent...easy to read n all...but overall your won this with a better overall verse and punches...8.6/10........

heat- your verse was nice a little, but your punches really didnt seem to connect hard enough...your structure was layed out nice...but you went weak on punches thats all...5.9/10.......

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Dude u gotta learn how to use the words ya usin. Ur misspellin words, usin them in the wrong tense, and usin them outta context...u really need to work on ya vocab bruh