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Voted For: Given Light

Well i felt this was a very one sided battle...

Stanza:

You had good emotion but thats about it, no vocabulary or imagery everything was just put and w2orded so simply. I like your thought pattern behind the verse but overall you didnt bring enough to the verse to make it stand out over GL's.

Given Light:

Your emotion was decent not as thoroughly written as stanza's but not bad either. Vocabulary is what set your verse in the right direction. And you were pretty consistent throughtout the verse.. most people just touch on the topic here and there but you stayed steady throughout. Your imagey wasnt too bad but you werent really desciptive in some spots where it could have been better.

Overall GL gets my vote for being more complex and staying on the topic better

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

lmaooo wasn't u sayin dat red bull is gay and all dis shit now u down with da establishment??

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

This thread has been automatically closed."

^^he's scared.lol

^Least you could've done is posted a vote LoL ........

Well

To Golden Days Thanx for voting
To Era Zestable Thanx for voting
To Marvjay - you shouldve been keepin up with the times mayne we been sqaushed that beef

and To

[b[Given Light can we close this battle We all know you won and Stuff i dont want a lost on my record for facing somebody way outta my luegue [/b]

I want a win, so if you pm the mods, and I can get a win, and you can escape without a loss, that's fine with me.

Upping for more votes to get this closed..........

Both of these topicals were really good. Stanza, yours was easier going and flowing good and it stayed on topic the whole time. Given Light, you stayed on topic, and you had nice vocabulary, but I didn't like the swearing, lol. If I could give both of you a vote I would, but since I'm just gunna post feedback.

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Voted For: Given Light

Given Light - Nice Drop!! I liked the topical idea and I really enjoyed your verse, it had a lot of feeling in it, the shit was deep yo. The flow and structure was on point and your vocab was pretty good. You stayed on topic all the way through creating an overall hot piece, i definitely think you should put this up as an open mic. Keep doin ya thing, but one point is try to shorten your lines a bit and it might give you a better flow, still though your drop is tight.

Stanza - A Good Drop!! The oversized writing, i don't get why people do that. Your drop was nice, structure and flow was on point but I think Given's went better. You stayed on topic to and there was effort and feeling visible in your drop. I just think that Given put more into his, i was feelin his verse more. U had good vocab in yours and everything, but overall i think Given takes this because i was feelin his verse more.

- Return the Favour On One Of My Battles!!! Links In Siggy!!!

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Voted For: Given Light

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uppin ................And If No One else Votes Then

I Forfeit That means I give you the win

so Now You can PM strobe and jus Get the battle Closed I want to move on and i dont have n e more room ........So

I Quit

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