Voted For: warrior

warrior took this battle in my opinion.....they both came decent but warriors structure was better and easier to read....he also added more creativity to his verse...kin ur verse it was like good but like didnt do it for me..its like ur words barely rhymed at sum points......just get ur structure better and re-word ur verse a lil bit and u be straight.....yall should do a re-match when you get ur shit fixed up

v/ warrior

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Voted For: Kin*Ethicâ„¢

This was an okay battle seen alot better both structure's were horrible but okay..

Kin:
Leave this warrior |Deceased-Swiftly| after he sees my verse hell |Delete-Quickly| .. I |Cease-Pity| Cuz my punches 'Quickly Put An End To WAR' like a |Peace-Treaty!|
Okay opener, could have been better
I |Attack-Wit| |Graphic-Spits| |Packed-Wit| |Acidic-Fists| .. We all know this 'Warriors A Pussy' like Thunder |Kat Kids!| .. Warriors just a |Wack-Bitch| Who |Lacks-Wits| So u can say I 'Killed Warrior' like 'Deleting Lloyd Banks' |Track-List!|
Okay, decent
Wat this 'Dick Turn Into A Pussy' & no one |Stop-Yer-Sex-Switch| .. Im |OnTop-Of-Text-Lists| So watch as I 'Put An End To ARR' like pirates with |Proper-English!|
Nice closer ,

Overall this was a decent drop , seen you do alot better around , but it was enough to win this battle, elevate on using bette punchlines and try not to stretch your lines..

warrior
u lame~as~shit, gonna force me to change~my~sig and put ur name~in~it/
cause he the type to reword verses, rewrite em and then claim~they~his/
Not feeling this
but the thing is, u knew u couldn't rearrange~the~words~forever/
so he switches sites that way he can just copy and paste~a~verse~together/
Not feeling that
battlein me? u the first herb to want to start there record wit a lost~i~guess/
and just cause im scorchin ya work dont mean u ready to be hells architect/
Okay
ill give u a heart attack and 8 lines is all~i~need/
cause only way my name'll be in ya sig is if "ED ME" was right after the R.I.p[/b]
Prety weak closer

Overall it was a pretty weak verse, and kin took this one hands down , elevate more and keep at it

Vote- Kin

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