Voted For: DAZZLE


Easier to battle ya mum, she brought yo here so il use slyness~to~diss~her...
No dough no love and ya rappers money....... is a minus~figure...Decent opener, good personal though,8/10
I could beat you with quick keyed lines coz im just~that~sick...
Take this easy, you cant write for shit....your dys~lex~ic...again decent bar, good personal here,was strong, and good use of the link against him/her.9/10
You disrespect god?, well i dont give a fuck for him so cant hate you for it...
but god jesus and this MC all have somethin in common...YOUR ALL BULLSHIT!!good closer, hard punch, you didnt need much, your verse was stronger then his/hers. you actually had punchlines...9/10


since age 12 I was told white boys can't rap//
now I'm hear to cut you down to a pile of crap//
umm, didnt seem like you tried to diss your opponent,or you did but it just was too weak..2/10
my names blashpemy cause my rhymes are a sin//
this may be my first battle but I'm destined to win//
again,where are the punchlines? your verses need work,no hate, but elevation is key.2/10
I'm lyricaly blessed//
a man so oppressed//
did you diss yourself? i think so, listen,just work on your verses and use personals/multies/ in fact read the tutorials
vote dazzle for a better verse
a little obsessed//
bound to be best//

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