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Thanx mayne favor was Returned
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Uuuuppppppppppiiiiiiinnnnnnnnn
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Voted For: Nelson Mandela
Vote= Mandela reason being... his verse stood out to more cuz i can relate to it... i was feeling his topic more although neither were that creative. i would've liked to see more of a slave dialect in Mandela's piece that would've given it a touch of Creative Dopeness. as for Stanza i didnt like his whole story telling aspect. i felt he could've been more discriptive mor vivid. his vocab lacked aswell. it would've brought the piece out more.
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as for the money that Stanza promised
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iight iight thanks yo.....uppin uppipn uppin......
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uppin dis battle fuckers..........................
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fuckin upping dis battle yo DAMN..................
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Uppin>>>>>>i Think Rv Is Just Like Vote-challenged Or Something
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uppin dis muh fuckin battle yo for real for real..
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Voted For: Stanza
damn....this is a hard one to call................ stanza...........ure shit flowed well playa.......lines seem stretched cuz of BIG text....i still am baffled as to why people do this.........anyway, u stayed on topic all the way through....a lot of feeling and emotion in ya drop.......delivered a sort of imagery to the thoughts n shit....a short topical when put against some i've seen which i like cuz it is too the point and effective....u didnt drag it on tryin to squeeze as much in as possible....ya vocab was nice, a couple of multies in there to....overall 7.5/10 nelson.....another gud drop.....strucutre was aight, not as tight as stanza and that is why his flowed better....u stayed on topic to and i liked ya approach to the topic....ya dropped a nice verse with feelin to.....had similar affect to stanza's with the imagery shit.........ya idea was good, vocab was nice and shit but i jsut think that stanza's flowed better and that is why i enjoyed his that little better...overall 7/10 V/ - stanza and plz RTF!!! don't just sleep on shit!! links are in my siggy!! |
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