Voted For: hotshh!

MarvJay1009:

Punches: 8/10

Personals: 6/10

Wordplay: 8/10

Flow: 5/10

Structure: 5/10

Overall: 32/50=64%

Pretty good verse from you...not the best that I've seen from you but it was good. I felt your structure was kinda fucked because a couple lines were stretched which messed up the flow. Punches and wordplay were pretty hot, but could've hit a little harder by your standards...

Hotshhh:

Punches: 8/10

Personals: 7/10

Wordplay: 8/10

Flow: 9/10

Structure: 9/10

Overall: 41/50=82%

This verse was pretty hot man...Feeling the punches, and I felt that they hit a little harder than his, plus you added more personals that hit, when most of his could've been directed towards anybody...Your structure was almost perfect, so your flow was too...Great closer as well...

No hate, just my honest opinion...RTF and hit up my battle vs Kesse in my sig...Thanx...1

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aiight fine
ill leave it be
but that nigga stay voting for you.
no beef against you
im just wondering wats up with flow riding you like that

back upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

Both of those verses fucking sucked.

..for real. That was terrible.

just like ya wack ass punchline league

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

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^^he's scared.lol

UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPpppppppppppppp pp

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Voted For: hotshh!

type of guns i hold make kops-get-scared,chill! ya not-sick-quer.
he raps like "nelly" ppl came da see marv spit no1 cares if "HOT in here

vs.

Ha! Im starving to play, cuz on da ball court u are what u Say
Ya shots miss on the net, Ive always owned a 'Marvolous JAy'
U need 2 eave son, no beast on the beat, we dont Believe em
U only visit "trackmasters" when ya girl gets her Weave done
So say hello to Defeat......... and kiss goodbye your Streak
Nightmares? HA!....... america reads ya shit to fall Asleep

Dammmmmnnnn@those last 2 hot. Marv, I woulda quoted more from you, but the spark was missing that was important to the punches. The quotablt you DID get was nicely worded. and hot, you started off ehhhh and i thought you would lose but you got hot and killed it. If y'all (espcially Marv) would lose that newb ass style and multi-filled garbage you would be dope as hell. Just being honest.

Vote - hotshh!

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yo hot do u think datz and explaiend vote fam..seriously im not bitch or anything just askin u

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^^he's scared.lol

nah, soc barley votes
so when he do, its sincere, no DR

Voted For: hotshh!

Damn seriously this is the best battle i've ever read in my life here in rv.. but yeah neway..

marv.. yeah man you came hot as hell as always.. your punchlines were very good.. and came very creative.. but once again as always your stucture is off.. n sorta your flow at times..

rate: 8/10

hotshh!:

damn man seriously you hella surprised me.. I had no idea that you were actually this good.. damn well neway.. your structure was pretty good.. and flow was on point in this one.. but damn man.. your lines were just plain amazing.. way more then just being creative.. just crazy as hell seriously man.. almost about every bar in ur verse was just hott.. wel yeah

My favorite line was:
So of course marv J "runshit"....... he too broke for a Whip!!
Da last time u hopped on anything dat move, was Strobe Dick
and
U need 2 eave son, no beast on the beat, we dont Believe em
U only visit "trackmasters" when ya girl gets her Weave done
So say hello to Defeat......... and kiss goodbye your Streak
Nightmares? HA!....... america reads ya shit to fall Asleep
(silly internet geeks!!)

weeerd

9/10

vote: Hotshh!

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omg.......you got all those votes DQ?

comon marv you said you aint want to make this a bitch fest

fucking horrible

if i win at least you aint lose to a bum

but i guess you wanna protect that streak
damn kid.....

fam i dont give a fukk about no streak.....soc didn't explain his vote...datz da only 1 i cared about really...and da last dat voted 4 u is in my crew and he basically talked about ya vs more than mine

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

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^^he's scared.lol

WTF? I DID explain faggot, I quoted the goods, and mentioned the bads/how to get better, what a bitch you are.

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