ite well if my battles are being slept on, then obviously urs r too u dumb ass, juss shut the fuck up saying all that dumb shit, cuz u sound real dumb sayin that

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Voted For: GKillaz05

ick weak battle but i'll vote on it cuz i'm feeling nice

gz killed the blac out partially because his punches were actually punches . my glock, it stay cocking, buh u, dawg u the weakest
ill let the heat spit and leave ya ass in a deep ditch that blac out will not get you wins

your rhyme scheme was off the whole way through and your structure was off but yea gz took this becauser he through in a few alright worded punches

step it up to both of you work on your personals and wording more ....

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Voted For: GKillaz05

voted for G

ight G got dis tp more harder punches and better personals

G
good punces hard hittin, nice personals and very creative wordplay, good strucutre elevate on ya multies

Black
came a lil basic wit punches n ya personals were weak elevate on ya multies as well, ya flow was good and ya structure as well but ya wordplay was basic fam

punches- g
personals- g
multies- neither
flow- tie
structure- tie
wordplay- G


g gets it i liked his punches and his personals more then Blac's

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Voted For: GKillaz05

yo ima get straight to the point, you wack and yes ill damage ya
wen u spit, ur shit trash, thats proof, theres no nice rappers livin in Canada
^ight opener.......
u wanna beef? i got the hammer tucked, its nothing lets get it poppin
this kid can not win, im the nigga u not toppin
^not that great.....
my glock, it stay cocking, buh u, dawg u the weakest
ill let the heat spit and leave ya ass in a deep ditch
^basic and too much self glore..
i found out ya future, yea i had a talk wit jesus
he said if u made rappin ur personal career, youll never be rich
^ok......
so i can tell that he pissed, ill rip this cat in pieces
ill let the hawk cut ya skin repeatadly times so youll need to be re-stitched
^umm no..
wen it cums to Blac, niggas love how he spits
niggas like "hes gutta,gangsta,and is overall nice" buh G killa........nigga, hes which?
^no....
none of them, hes a bitch and ill let the foe' (4) fire
and put the heat to ya fuckin scalp like a blow dryer
^WTF...no..
G killa, man this hoes' tired
so ill leave him to sleep half a dozen under in the yard, under those flowers
^horrible...
wen it cums to G killaz. man hes a straight up bitch to me
all ill do is grip the heat, cock it, clap, then hes history
^bad closer..

^elevate...

overall:4.3/10....
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You aint ahead of me in the game, ive already lapped you...
Grab your led and aim, but grabbin' the W you cant adapt to...
^ok opener...
I'll slap your grin off and laugh, while you try to act tough...
You been soft like 'huggies' staff, and I cracked your bluff...
^ok...
Blac-outs goin to act like a lil baby, he cant break my punch...
The kids whack and crazy, like takin' Fat Joe out for lunch...
^lol..nice..
But if you did he'd be payin' instead, and thats a true fact...
After that you be layin' in his bed, hangin from his nut sack...
^basic...
Thinkin' you're a G that's outta control, about to be a lord?...
The only hot keys you've stole, were on my damn keyboard...
^basic...and played..
Audience be bored and snorin', Battles always get slept on...
You cant elevate like the floor, N blac's gettin' stepped on...
^??umm no..
I kept on comin wit tragic blows, u turn pussy like Timberlake..
Its like blacs doin a magic show, The way his bars are fake...
^ok...
Blac-out I heard you go 3 Roundz, I'll admit that I hated it...*
You came wit horrible sounds, that song RV over-rated it...
^ok closer..

overall:8.1/10...

vote:GKillaz05...

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Voted For: GKillaz05

mettas=killa
punches=killa
wordplay=killa
personals=killa
overall=killa

ya punches were harder n made alot more sense, although that shit about fat joe was a bit fucked up, didnt make much sense but the rest of ya verse was strong enough to beat him. Blac out man you need to sort ya structure out n learn how to incorporate wordplay n punchlines proparyly ite peace. rtf,http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=188270

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