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05-08-05, 01:55 AM
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IP: B1A5 868C
Voted For: Evolution
Evolution bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin ^ opener coulda been better bit too basic for me ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname ^ this is an aight bar better than the opener good flow rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved ^ good punch liked it u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one ^ lol good good this prolly ya best bar they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit ^ na not feelin it again like the opener basic Overall Good verse but it was the opener and closer that let you down on this IMO internally was good some good punches, rhyming was basic no multies metas none, personals none bar the money in ya mouth bit but i think that was layout for ya punch so no personals...coulda been better but good drop Bonecollectors Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit... Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit... ^ aight opener nuthin special i seen a lot of people start off like this ....Untouchable huh?... ^ Right i can understand where u puttin this it amplifies flow ......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble.... .......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble.... ^ good bar but the untouchable but shoulda jus joined although it would look stretched good none the less though Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!... Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?... ^ good liked this ............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign... Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain... ^ self-g blah ...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain... Like how'd i lose? but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain... ^ closer is...i dunno i'm not seeing the connection there not feelin it like 1st cat Overall Again good verse wit improvements i was likin it up until the self glory bit sorta to the end you fell but you were better in the majority of ya verse opener again was basic but you picked up decently from there fell off near the end again no multies metas none flowed structure good but this is gonna be tough to call ima vote... Evolution...jus purely outta conisistancy...RTF in my sig within 3 days or vote removed
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05-08-05, 02:27 AM
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IP: 606A F3AB
Voted For: Evolution
bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin -weak punch- ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname -ok- rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved -ok- u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one -decent- they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit -lol ok- vs. nothing...sorry but ur shit was either played or pointless or something that don't make sense dogg.....elevate really ur shit was whack IMO v/Evolution...for having a verse lol.....rtf if I ever open another battle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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05-09-05, 03:27 PM
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IP: 828D 0B7A
Voted For: Bonecollector
Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit... Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit... ....Untouchable huh?... Good ......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble.... .......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble.... Nice Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!... Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?... LOL ............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign... Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain... ...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain... Like how'd i lose? but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain... TITE =8/10 a reali tite verse, had sum reali good punches VS bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin NAH ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname GOOD rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved NAH u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit WTF??? DATS LAME.............. =7/10 DAT WAS AN OK VERSE BUT U DIDNT COME HARD ENUF......... V/BONECOLLECTOR Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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05-09-05, 03:36 PM
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IP: 606D F99A
Voted For: Evolution
-This is an LFS Review- Bonecollector Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit... Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit... Decent open ......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble.... .......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble.... Basic...yea Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!... Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?... This is good...though my area code is 973...so that applys to me lol ............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign... Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain... Meh...not the greatest ...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain... Like how'd i lose? but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain... Not the best close but was decent Evo bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin Decent at most[/]b ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname [b]Got a giggle outta me rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved NICE! u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one Didn't catch it...I'm slow sometimes they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit Decent close... Overall: Evo...Bone I've seen WAY better from you...Evo got you in this one...rtf in my sig...ALL OF IT or I will NEVER...EVER!!!!!!!!!!! rtf on you. Have a Nice Day.
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05-09-05, 03:56 PM
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IP: 20B2 DF4A
Voted For: Bonecollector
Bone you got this one by a long shot You had some metas... and actually related ur rhymes with things that made sense.. Evo... stick to poetry Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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05-09-05, 03:58 PM
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IP: 4BE6 56FC
Voted For: Bonecollector
bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin Um, No...3/10 ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname Nah Kid...4/10 rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved Ok...Not Hard Hittin Tho...4.5/10 u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one I Dont Get It....4/10 they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit Best Line......5.5/10 Needs Work Buddy....Now Bone.... Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit... Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit... Tight Open Line...6/10 ....Untouchable huh?... ......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble.... .......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble.... Ahhh Dat Was Aight...Didnt Hit Too Hard...5.5/10 Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!... Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?... Dis Line Was Straight...Was Feelin It...6.5/10 ............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign... Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain... Jeah Dats A Nice Line Son....7/10 ...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain... Like how'd i lose? but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain... Aha Nice Close....6.5/10 Punches- BoneC Personals- Tie Creativity- BoneC Wordplay- BoneC Its No Contest, He Took Da Opener & Closer, His Middle Was More Enjoyable, Had More Punches...Personals, And He Used Some Creativity...Evo Didnt Get As Creative Wit His Verse So....v/ BoneCollector Return Da Fav.
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05-11-05, 05:22 PM
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IP: 3D4D 97CE
Voted For: Evolution
aiight, wow....... pretty easy win in my eyes.....let me break it down EVO bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin no, this was wack, yo. 2/10 ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname not hard hitting. jus eh..... 3/10 rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved it's aiight.... not bad. 5/10 u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one wow... i really liked this. fuckin' dope, yo. 10/10 they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit haha... nice... 7/10 Ok, you started out wack as fuck, but finished strong. that "pick either one" oh, damn, original and Real creative, had me like "oh shit, nucca what?!?!" dope shit. 27/50 ok, bonecollector: Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit... Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit... wow... no, man... 2/10 ....Untouchable huh?... ......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble.... .......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble.... meh, it's ok. 4/10 Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!... Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?... no. not that great... 3/10 ............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign... Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain... wtf? no.... 2/10 ...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain... Like how'd i lose? but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain... not bad... 5/10 Overall, you really didn't try, or you need to elevate a lot. You have punches, but try makin' them wittier, cuz your punches are plain', nothing to make my mouth drop. nah mean? but keep elevatin, man. pc one. 13/50 Evo got this easy. v/evo pc one
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05-11-05, 06:00 PM
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IP: A8DD 1517
Voted For: Evolution
bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin doesnt really mean nothin....1/10 ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname decent 4/10 rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved nice...7/10 u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one decent...5/10 they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit nice...6/10 overall....23/50 Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit... Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit... decent....4/10 ....Untouchable huh?... ......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble.... .......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble.... decent....4/10 Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!... Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?... ehh...2/10 ............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign... Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain... self glory....0/10 ...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain... Like how'd i lose? but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain... ahh nice...7/10 overall....17/50 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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05-12-05, 03:40 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: Bonecollector
............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign... Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain... ^^^lmao of dat line Bonecollector won dis hands down he had way more creative punches den evo evo ya verse was to basic and ya punches wasnt at all hard hittin ya vocab was to basic to while bone on da otha hand had creative punches nice wordplay and nice structure good battle v/bonecollector Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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05-12-05, 06:16 PM
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Cus I Jus Ma$fit Dis Shit
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IP: 5308 6668
Voted For: Bonecollector
votin for bone...gotta problem wit it?...bite me!!! evo: bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin ^^wack opener dawg ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname ^^guess u holdin on to dat wack shit huh?...iight rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved ^^nice one...good, good u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one ^^*blank*, what?...dont get it they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit ^^really didnt get it...bad closer bone: Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit... Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit... ^^okay opener...could have been much better ....Untouchable huh?... ......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble.... .......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble.... ^^lol, had me laughin...iight Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!... Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?... ^^nice one ............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign... Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain... ^^seemed forced ...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain... Like how'd i lose? but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain... ^^good closer my nig...nice one now if dat aint enuff... struc: "hmmmmm" flow: bone vocab: niether punches: bone personals: bone dats bout it crab cakes! my vote=bone collector stay live
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05-13-05, 10:17 AM
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aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: Evolution
okay.... evo: bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin ^^LOL UUH DECENT OPENER ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname ^^^LMAOOO NICE PUNCH.... rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved ^^^^GOOD CONCEPT BUT U WORDED IT FUKKED UP...BUT STILL A GOOD LINE u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one ^^^NAH they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit ^^^WASN'T FEELIN DIS...OVERRALL U HAD A SOLID VERSE...NOT DAT MUCH CREATIVITY bone: Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit... Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit... ^^^OKAY OPENER ....Untouchable huh?... ^^^???????WHUT IS DIS 4 ......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble.... .......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble.... ^^^LOL U SOUND LIKE A LIL ASS KID HERE FAM... Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!... Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?... ^^^LOL NO ............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign... Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain... ^^^WORDED TERRIBLE BUT IT S OKAY ...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain... Like how'd i lose? but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain... ^^^^NOPE.... V/EVO.... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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05-15-05, 12:06 PM
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*Im'a Hustla*
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IP: 963B DD50
Voted For: Evolution
lmao Evo got this one.. he still needs to work on his wording in punches and stuff.. but still his flow and structure was on point.. this was a pretty good battle by both but bone just didnt come as hard as i expected he had some nice punches at first but then fell off more towards the end of his verse... as to evo was hard hitting pretty much the whole way thru... ughh really no personals from either beside bone's opener.... soo no hate but vote goes to evo due to his punches just hitting a little bit harder thru out.... soooooooo good luck to both i just think evo edged it a bit.. |
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