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Old 05-12-05, 06:03 PM   #2
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Old 05-12-05, 11:50 AM   #3
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This was a pretty decent drop ,
I was feeling it, Your structure was perfect
Wordplay and vocab was good , felt it could be alittle better though
Nice Creativity..titles Juelz though but okay lol,.
Nice meta's really feelin it , made your verse really good
Flow was on point.
Overall nice drop ..keep it up
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Old 05-12-05, 06:06 PM   #4
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This was a pretty decent drop ,
I was feeling it, Your structure was perfect
Wordplay and vocab was good , felt it could be alittle better though
Nice Creativity..titles Juelz though but okay lol,.
Nice meta's really feelin it , made your verse really good
Flow was on point.
Overall nice drop ..keep it up


Jeah Good Lookin Kid......I Used Juelz Title Cuz It Went Wit Da Concept......But Stay Up Tho
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Old 05-13-05, 04:27 PM   #5
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Man that shit was hot, that shit would be off the hook wit a hot beat. See I aint liar I was just busy!
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Old 05-14-05, 12:33 AM   #6
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pretty hot drop, u seemed like u knew what u was talkin about in there, ya flow was on point, and u had nice rhymes and shit. some good multies were in there along wit some decent bars. only thing i would say is work on ya punches some more, so they can b a lil bit stronger, nah mean. then you'll b a beast, cuz u got erething else so keep doin ya thing.
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Old 05-14-05, 02:37 PM   #7
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nice piece of work righ here B
wordplay was tight B
structure incredible
u gots some good potential
props due
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Old 05-15-05, 09:33 PM   #8
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Thanks For Peepin @ Yall............Uppin Dis Shit Everyone Who Views This Should Reply
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Old 05-15-05, 10:59 PM   #9
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some nice shit

first OM of yours i've peeped

flow was nice as fuck, everythin went well, ya had some decent vocabs but always room for improvement there, ya wordplay was dope as fuck...best part of the whole thing i think personally............

overall.............8/10!!!

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Old 05-16-05, 06:49 PM   #10
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Aight Fam.........Imma Peep Ya Shit When I'm Done Doin Dis Otha Open Mic.........But Dis Only My 2nd One Lol
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Old 05-18-05, 05:43 PM   #11
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