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05-17-05, 01:09 PM | #16 | |||||
Cus I Jus Ma$fit Dis Shit
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real talk, uppin
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05-27-05, 10:51 AM | #17 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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It's cool piece, strange concept though rofl with all them "good mornings" hehe. It wasn't really an imagery or emotional piece, more of a amusing one. Rhymes didn't always work the way they should which affects your flow here and there but overall, it's okay. It's hard to criticize because the topic doesn't allow you to use heaps of emotion or imagery. Overall, I liked reading this...like the hook...
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